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The Unexpected Visit - Chapter III; STAR WARS ROLEPLAY, CHAPTER III
Topic Started: Oct 28 2008, 01:06 PM (65 Views)
Liam Sr.
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Magnus Auvinen.
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Before I continue with my Story of Star Wars Roleplay, I know these shouldn't really go here, but I like to demonstrate that I actually do Roleplay. The Chapters that have happened so far is basiclly the Rise and Downfall of Magnus Auvinen and returning an Old character back into the scene, some of you may be familiar with the character Morpeth Nemesia / Darth Metyus - Let me explain a little about Morpeth before I continue.

Morpeth Nemesia was my first ever character on SWRP He was with me for the whole four years of my SWRP career, he was created on the first day I started and from there, developed. Morpeth Nemesia was sent away so I could introduce Magnus, Magnus was the apprentice of Morpeth Nemesia.

I will be doing a story shortly on how all of my characters apart from Niracuv Vossen are linked, Many of you never understood why I have five main characters, I will explain soon enough but for now I shall carry on with my Story.
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After Magnus had fought Darth Ferinus for the title of Dark Lord, Ferinus casted Magnus back into the chaos realm where he entailed a new darkness, something he had never felt before, never seen before or never heard before. The prophecy always was that Magnus could never be killed and never be destroyed. Magnus wandered the plains of chaos, re-forming and re-gathering his strength so he could return and re-take the mantle of Dark Lord from his betraying Sith Lord. The Chaos realm was a fiery chasm, full of Darkness, the realm of the dead, the realm of destruction and the realm of entity. Three different realms made up Chaos. When Magnus was originally created in Chaos by Sith Alchemy from his former master, Darth Metyus also known as Morpeth Nemesia, Magnus was granted unatural power. Although he was spat from the abyss of chaos and he had unimaginable power, he never really knew what he was created for. Something that had dwelled in the back of his mind for the last two thousand years.

Over the years, Magnus became one of the most powerful and most brutal Sith ever known in Sith History, with the learning of Midichlorian manipulation, creating his own keepsakes so he could retain his power, the faction of the Dethriiati and last but not least, being the apprentice of the Spirit Dark Lord known as Darth Nihilus.

It was time to release the power that Magnus had sought out for quite some time, Magnus bowed before Darth Nihilus as his spiritn arose from his personal Holocron.

:: My Apprentice, you have done well this far, but I have one more task for you ::

" Yes my lord?"

:: Travel to the planet of Khiar Shan and Korriban, visit the Valley of the Sith Lords and the Valley of the Dark Lords. There is something you must obtain for me, a Sith Holocron containing the ancient knowledge trapped by all the contained spirits within. Once you have obtained this, bring this back to me and with this I can take physical form and return."

"Of course my master, I will do as you wish."

Magnus first travelled to Khiar Shan to the Valley of the Sith Lords, recognising a statue of himself there, he noticed something slightly amiss, a defect within the statue, a mark over his left eye, Magnus thought nothing of it and continued to proceed into the Temple on top of the mountain. Magnus entered the mountain where he encountered undead Sith.

As he proceeded a spirit before him appeared, The Sith Spirit of Dark Lord Valaryc. Valaryc quizzed him on what Magnus was doing here.

:: Magnus Auvinen, what brings you to the belly of the best? ::

"I have come for more power, more destruction and death"

:: What makes you think I am going to let you take the Sith Holocron Of Khiar Shan ::

"I am not asking you, I am taking it regardless"

:: Brave you have become, standing up against your former master's master. However, you shall not be taking anything with you ::

Valaryc summoned a ball of energy to his spirit hand, casting this at Magnus, Magnus caught this and using the force deflected it back into the spirit of Valaryc, dispersing the spirit.

Magnus laughed at the weakness of the Spirit, not knowing that the Spirit that appeared before him was nothing but puppet worl and not the real Valaryc. Magnus proceeded towards the Sith Holocromn situated within the depths of the Temple. He concealed the holocron and took this back to the Sith Dreadnaught.

Showing the Holocron to the spirit of Darth Nihilus, Magnus bowed before the great Dark Lord revealing the first out of the two Sith Holocrons.

:: You have done well my apprentice, now you must acquire the other so I can return to my physical form. ::

"It shall be done my master."

Magnus entered the co-ordinates for the Korriban system, proceeding towards something haunted the back of Magnus's mind. The scar on Magnus's own statue on Khiar Shan. The more he thought about the more he recognised the scar but he couldn't quite put a finger on it. Not realising what it was that was about to happen, the time for the end of Magnus had arisen, too long had Magnus gone undead, unscathed by his enemies, constantly re-forming from Chaos to strike down his enemies.

Eventually Magnus came to a blockade above the Korriban system. Magnus sensed the presence of Darth Axurion, his former master.
Darth Axurion's sith armada was blocling the way through to the Korriban system. Magnus used force travel to face the Sith.

Appearing on the bridge deck behind Axurion, Magnus spoke a few words to him.

"It seems you are blocking my way through Axurion"

"It seems that way, doesn't it?"

Magnus withdrew the Soria Lightsaber and fired this down into ignition. Axurion just stood there, not moving nor speaking. Magnus proceeded towards Axurion, striking him down to the floor.

Magnus blinded by his arrogance thought nothing of the kill, not even lingering over the Idea that Axurion did not fight back, nor make a sound. Something was amiss but Magnus blinded by his power and arrogance thought it was just because he was simply too much for Axurion to handle.


Magnus's ego had rocketed through the sky, thinking that he was the most powerful Sith in the galaxy. When Magnus returned to the Sith Dreadnaught he noticed that the Sith Armada had gone, dissapeared and removed itself in the space of Magnus killing Axurion and leaving the ship. But what he didn't realise yet again was, that whoever created the Spirit of Valaryc on Khiar Shan, had done the same again with Darth Axurion, none of the Sith Armada was real, Axurion was not real, nothing that Magnus saw, touched or slayed was real. But in his own arrogance did not realise this.

Eventually magnus reached the Valley of the Dark Lords. Proceeding through the temple, there was nothing to stand in his way this time, eventually when he came to the chamber of the Sith Holocron. Magnus stopped in his tracks, looking to the right side of him he noticed something else that had got his attention.

A mask hung on the wall, encased in concrete but revealing the scar on the left eye as the statue did before. Magnus recognised the mask but could not quite put his finger on it, ignoring the signs that he had right infrot of him, he carried on to obtain the Sith Holocron anyway.

Taking a hold of the Sith Holocron he took this back to the Sith dreadnaught and put it before the Spirit of Darth Nihilus.

Magnus was instructed to leave the area while Nihilus brought himself back into the physical form once again. Magnus left the area, hearing screams the sound of energies, Magnus felt something that he had never felt before, but the strange thing was the power source was not coming from the ship it was coming from the Thule System.

Magnus rushed to the room to see what had happened, the items and the holocrons had gone, the spirit of Nihilus had faded, revealing nothing to him, Magnus could not understand what was going on, nor could he understand what was about to happen.

A Strange force energy had the dreadnaught within its grasp, dragging the Sith dreadnaught with magnus inside with such speed, it fired through the currents in space directly to the Thule System, the Ship was moving at such speed that the hull was heating up rapidly,l the controls within the ship eventually became overheated and bursted into flames, sending down the Sith dreadnaught through the Thule atmosphere, eventually reaching Thule. The Sith Dreadnaught crashed down into the surface, smashing the hull into the ground there, smoke arising as the ship burst into flames.

Magnus's body crawled from underneath the wreckage, glancing into the distance he saw a bleak figure heading towards him in the distance.
Due to the smoke and the heatwaves rising from the floor, Magnus could not make out who it was. As the figure drew closer, it stopped dead in its tracks. Clouds overhead began gathering around the wreckage and the wind began to shift from the figure towards Magnus direction, As Magnus's sight focused onto the figure standing there only he knew who it was.

Magnus focused some more and then realised who it was, his former master... Using the force Magnus used the force to enhance his vision and hearing, the figurehead was muttering some words that he could not understand.

The figurehead began shouting in an aggressive tone the following words, as if he was singing some kind of song to Magnus, the calm before the storm, the figurehead walking in an extremley aggressive manner towards Magnus's broken body.

The figure became closer and only then did Magnus realise who it was, the Scar over the left eye, the Mask on one half of his face, revealing the other side, burnt, charcoaled and horrificly defected, something had changed about him, he had lost his previous hair, his body looked like the material he manipulated. The figure stood before Magnus repeating the words :

"Another mission
The powers have called me away
Another time
To carry the colors again
My motivation
An oath I’ve sworn to defend
To win the honor
Of coming back home again
No explanation
Will matter after we begin
Another dark destroyer that’s buried within
My true vocation
And now my unfortunate friend
You will discover
A war you’re unable to win

I'll have you know
That I’ve become… Indestructible
Determination that is incorruptible
From the other side
A terror to behold
Annihilation will be unavoidable
Every broken enemy will know
That their opponent had to be invincible
Take a last look around while you’re alive
I’m an indestructible master of war

Another reason
Another cause for me to fight
Another fuse uncovered
Now, for me to light
My dedication
To all that I’ve sworn to protect
I carry out my orders
With not a regret
A declaration
Embedded deep under my skin
A permanent reminder
Of how we began
No hesitation
When I am commanded to strike
You need to know
That you’re in for the fight of your life

You will be shown
How I've become....

Indestructible
Determination that is incorruptible
From the other side
A terror to behold
Annihilation will be unavoidable
Every broken enemy will know
That their opponent had to be invincible
Take a last look around while you’re alive
I’m an indestructible master of war

I'm...

Indestructible
Determination that is incorruptible
From the other side
A terror to behold
Annihilation will be unavoidable
Every broken enemy will know
That their opponent had to be invincible
Take a last look around while you’re alive
I am indestructible (indestructible)

Indestructible
Determination that is incorruptible
From the other side
A terror to behold
Annihilation will be unavoidable
Every broken enemy will know
That their opponent had to be invincible
Take a last look around while you’re alive
I’m an indestructible master of war"

"I told you Magnus I would come back to kill you"

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"Then why wait until now to kill me?"

"Because Magnus, unlike you. I am smart. Brutal I might be, but no need for hastey actions, unfortunatley for you, this shows and now I will be remembered for being the only one in the Galaxy to destroy you, you are such a worthless, spineless freak of the force that drifted out of control and it's time to end this right now, you are no creation of chaos, who dio you think saved you from dying? who do you think granted you your power?? it wasn't Nihilus, I was the one who formed the spirit of Nihilus to you, I was the one who made you think you got rid of the Valaryc Spirit and I was the one who caused you to believe you killed Axurion, none of that was real and due to your arrogance it shows. Now embrace what I am about to give to you, the gift that all others wanted to give you, but only I am able to fulfill it..."

The air fell silent, the blazing Dreadnaught behind Magnus shattered and crumbled, like the pin that fell before the final blow had been hit, it was time to put the Lord Of Chaos away for good.

Morpeth looked down at Magnus, holting his Lightsabers to his side, hse speaks to the fallen lord of chaos.

"Do you remember what I was famous for Magnus?"

"Yes, the manipulation of any metallic material"

"Then you should remember this feeling"

Morpeth flung his hands into the air before Magnus very eyes, using the force and his knowledge on Sith Metallurgy and how to manipulate the materials molecular level, he crushed the Pendulus Amulet and the Auvinen Crufix within Magnus's body. The body began to emitt energy waves as the power depleted from his body, the heat emitting from the floor from the wrecked Dreadnaught caught onto Magnus's body, forming flames around the corpse, the body of Magnus fell to the floor completley, twisting as his skinned peeled, his bones turned to ash and his mind, destroyed and manipulated. All the people that were attached to him in some form had felt the death of MAgnus Auvinen, Yuin-Kai his former Jedi Master, his brother Virtus and Zidane-Kast, all felt the death of their brother, the death of a legend and the death of one of the most Brutal Sith Lords ever known in sith history.

Morpeth stood there and said :" The deed is done". 2000 years of waiting to return and kill his apprentice who casted him away, Morpeth began staring infront of the wrecked Dreadnaught and the charcoaled corpse of Magnus Auvinen. Tilting his head up to face the stars and the lifting smoke from the wrecked Dreadnaught Morpeth let loose some words, heeding his presence.

"I have returned, let the galaxy feel my presence"

Hope you enjoyed the scene.
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That's great
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Morpeth Nemesia.

Ive heard of him.

He sounds 1337.

LET HIM TRAINZ VIRTUS.
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Seamus, how much more training do you need? Seems like you're always being trained. Train train train. No fun fun fun.
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Good story Liam, but i think it needed more detail you know what I mean. Only if you want to, since your the only one who sounds like they actually rp, you can describe the scene, maybe the appearance more of this new man who killed magnus. Or... maybe you already know this and as we speak doing it for Chapter IV
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