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The invasion of Onderon.; [ After the space battle. ]
Topic Started: Aug 20 2008, 12:50 PM (21 Views)
Beau.
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It was a warm, sunny day on Onderon. Many deals to be made, drinks to be drank. A merchant, yelled: "Lookout, something's raining from the sky!". With that, the people looked up. There was the previous invasion fleet, now reinforced with a new type of fleet. The advanced one's. The primary invasion fleet moved in. Destroyer's and dropships began to land. They released thousand's of droid troop's, and Mercenary's onto the battle field. They trudged through the sand, firing at any being's outside the gate's, or on the walls. Meanwhile, the landed destroyer's firing upon the wall. Frigate's dropped, aswell, dropping support tank's, reinforcement's, colto tank's, and other necessary supplies. In a flash, black triangle's began to rain down like meteor's. They crashed through the sand, and were not seen for thirty seconds. The men stationed on the walls saw a rumble in the sand. In an instant, the monolith's rose up. They fired plasma at the walls, and some began to fly over them. They shot all of the ground troop's incoming, wasting them away. An anti-air turret aimed down at one of them. It fired off eight round's, destroying the monolith. Two nearby monolith's began to repair it. The bottom part was never repaired. The broken monolith transformed outward, forming a walker. Two heavy plasma turrets came out of it. It was a horrible sight for the onderonian military. At that thougt, the destroyer's began to rise up. They flew across onderon, firing down upon the city of Iziz. Destroying many building's and people. The monolith's began to bond together, into giant pyramid's. In each pyramid, contained five monolith's, and an empty space in the centre.
The first invasion force retreated back to the sand. They began to load their troops into their ships, with very few casualties. The monolith Pyramid's then charged the giant cannon's in the centre of them. They fired them at eachother's plasma generator's. This charged one monolith fully. The monolith, being supported by 98 other's, fired upon the city. The plasma ripped through the sand, charring it. It then blasted along the sand, and entered the city. The blast demolished many building's, shreading them apart, bit by bit, and burning through the sand. It created a large crater, in the center of iziz. The main government building. Due to lack of energy, the monolith's jumped into the air, and flew through hyperspace, following the invasion fleet. They went back, to the unknown regions. Droid Dropships departed from their Frigate's and destroyer's, and began to rain down on onderon. Once landed in the city, near the destroyed walls, they began to open up, unloading racks and racks of construction droid's and soldier droid's. The construction droids began their work, building new structure's and homes, and cleaning up the severely burned sand. They worked there, and began to re-build society. Under a new rule, onderon prospered.
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Matt V
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Should space your parapraphs out - makes it easier to read. :up:
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Beau.
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It's all one paragraph.
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Matt V
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Why make it all one paragraph? xD It's hard to read :(
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