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Taken over.
Topic Started: Jul 21 2008, 08:32 PM (26 Views)
ImTheeJordz

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Keio walked through the old temple of the Corellia temple, He was alittle weary, as over the last few days he'd been feeling really angry and tempted to experiment with powers he'd never even dare to use before, he entered into the Archives, and passed through the first room slowly.

as he came into the second part of the Jedi Archives his Holocorn activated that he'd thought was a mere stone, he picked up in the courtyard (watcantido rp'ed on IM to do this bit with me) a hooded man appeard, and used " Force mind controll " on Keio, Keio ran forward into the third part of the Jedi Archives, but he was to late, slowly he emerged back into the second part, glaring to the padwan and Jedi Knight Gadis, a sudden beam of Dark Aura was emmited from the youngling startling the two.

The padwan armed him self with his saber, further angering the initiate. The Knight sat back thinking that the padawan could kill the empowerd youngling, he was so wrong, The young Jedi utilizing Form VII and utilizing advanced dark force powers held off the two of them put together before the padwan gave up, The initiate and the Knight engaged into an interesting lightsaber duel, and the Knight attempted to trick the initiate but missed putting the stun cuffs onto him, and then Keio struck down the Knight taking his saberstaff.

a wondering Jedi Padawan named Alek walked into the Archives, the other Padwan (agent) instructed Alek to kill the controlled Jedi, but the padawan failed and was killed instantly by the power of Keio, Keio turned to face the other padwan, as he wielded now two sabers.

More Jedi Rushed into the archives and all were held off by the youngling, another padwan (bongoBob) lunged towards Keio and was then struck down by his immense power. A jedi master was having difficulty trying to attack Keio, driving to fight him off. Keio at the same time was struggling against the invading dark aura, and then having half controlled his light aura, was stun cuffed by a Jedi master.

The Jedi master asked questions upon who was killed and what has acutally happened, then the master fully flushed light aura throughout Keio's body and told him to go and study..
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Zen Den'hou
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It's okay but um.

a Jedi padawan using Vapaad would be totally unrealistic and impossible.


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Aaron
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I really don't like the way that was written, it was jumpy and not very descriptive. It didn't flow well, or so I thought.
Keep practicing though/
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