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| The Battle of Onderon. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 18 2008, 08:09 PM (39 Views) | |
| Beau. | Jul 18 2008, 08:09 PM Post #1 |
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Chapter I; The Beginning. As the Consortium's fleet reached onderon, they were met by Republic cruisers, flagships, fighter's, and destroyers. After a brief com-link meeting, via the databases of both of the main flagships, the two factions began to open fire upon each other. The Affinity, the Main flagship, fired upon a destroyer. The Affinity's missile fins opened, raining missiles down upon the destroyer. The destroyer suddenly combusted, due to an overheat of it's reactor. It explodes, as the Affinity eased away. The exploding ship took out a battle cruiser beside it. Unscathed , The Affinity swooped under a small squadof fighters. With blasts all around, the affinity sent out the turbolasers, suddenly erasing the fighters from history. A large destroyer, of the Consortium, swooped over a Onderonian battle station. The destroyer charged it's particle laser, while being fired upon. It shot the beam down, into the station's main control room. The blast ripped through the room, and through the other side, into a small frigate. A large squadron of fighters swooped in on the destroyer, fireing upon it. They fired small, but accurate bolts into the destroyer, taking out it's shield generator, and some turbolasers. One of tthe onderonian fighter's suddenly stopped working, because of an engine failure. It crashed through the bridge of the destroyer, killing the pilots, and other crew. The ship was then disabled. Chapter II; A brief decision. After a short period of time, the Onderonian forces drew back, being pelted with particle blasts, hail-like missiles, convoy's of buzz droids, and of course, turbolaser fire. With little casualties on the Consortium's side, the commander, Carn xionis ordered the whole fleet to move in. After a small jump from hyperspace, an Eclipse star destroyer, accompanied by sixteen squadrons of fighters rained out of hyperspace. Two hundred bombers, and four hundred destroyers also came out. This was but a mere speck, within the fleet of the Consortium. With the already deployed Four thousand destroyers, Nine capital ships, and two flag ships, aswell as Nine hundred fighters, moved in upon the onderonian Military. The Affinity, the one ship responsible for thwe highest kill rate on the battlefield, zoomed in, through the forces of the Onderonians. With battles raging on both sides, a Consortium frigate being blown up, and an onderonian Capital ship being bombarded with turbolaser fire, about to explode, the Affinity zoomed through the battle. The Affinity's missile fins once again opened, only to find their mark upon three capital ships, two fighter squadrons, and a small frigate. The Onderonian military hadn't taken a hit like that in a long time. With the eclipse charging the main laser, and the Affinity heading to the flagship of the Onderonian military, all was good. The Affinity zoomed through two onderonian destroyers, firing it's heavy lasers intob their hulls, and the bridge's. The explosion ripped through the bridge, into the lower area of the ship, making them both explode. Spinning out of the blast, the Affinity, landed right beside the Doombringer. The Onderonian's flagship. With heavy fire on both sides, the onderonian's ship's shield generatyor was depleted. heavy fire from the heavy turbolasers, and the heavy turrets, the Flagship was taking damage. The Affinity's shield generator suddenly burst open, combusting throughout the miantenance deck. Carn Xionis barked an order. The Admiral then replied; "But Sir, if we fire the missile's from this range, we will be taken out , too. " Carn replied to this, distaintly. "I gave you an order. I expect you to follow it". At that, the missile fins opened up again, This time, four of the silo's had been emptied, and not replenished with missiles. The rain went on, however. It shot through the bridge, the hull, the wing's, the engines, and the rest of the other Flagship. At that note, the Affinity reared around, jumping into hyperspace. The rest of the fleet quickly defeated their enemies, and turned around aswell. Chapter III; The End, of the Brief battle. Astonished by this action,the onderonian military almost started to cheer. When the final Consortium ship had gotten behind the eclipse, It was time. The Eclipse fired it's superlaser through space, attracting the ship like a magnet. It burnd through the hulls of all the enemy ships, except for a few small ones, lucky enough to escape the massive blast. For space being so dark, it was never so light. The Rest of the Consortium's fleet reared away, into hyperspace, smiling at their victory, with near only 9,00 Losses, Mainly fighters, and small frigate's. The Eclipse Also turned, jumping into hyperspace. The Next day, Carn xionis ordered the planet of Onderon to be captured. And so it was. With most of the defence gone into the battle the previous day, the previous day, the Onderonian Military fell, like butter to a piece of toast. |
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| Beau. | Jul 20 2008, 09:22 AM Post #2 |
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Hai.
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Bump for being l33t. |
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| Dylan | Jul 20 2008, 11:28 AM Post #3 |
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Zidane Kast.
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Paragraph it better. |
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