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THE ARMY OF DARKNESS; Part II of "Horrors of Adam McByrd"
Topic Started: Apr 22 2005, 09:35 PM (323 Views)
Akakios
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There will be 110 Chapters + =)

Army of Darkness
Picks up where Caller I.D. Left off.
By Solerus Productions
Part II of "The Horrors of Adam McByrd"

Prologue- The Army of Darkness

Adam lay on the roof lifelessly. He was at an inclined angle an was sliding toward the attic. Which was bad, since it wasn't stable. Adam fell. He landed on his back.

Was he alive? Did you just experience the main character's death? Or is he alive?
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In Dark place

The hand was pulling Ryan further and further down into Dark place. What was happening? Ryan fell into the depths of Dark place.

"AUGH! WHERE AM I?!" Ryan looked around. "Wha-what? What the Dark place?" He saw lots of naked people slaving to death. Rocks tumbling on people. People burning to death. He saw Satan commanding his Army of Troops. This was bad. It seemed that Satan was going to send over 25 demons to Earth.

"Satan?!" Ryan ran toward him. Satan responded, "What the tweze do you want?"
"You!"
Ryan shot a beam of energy at Satan.
It seemed to dodge him. Purposly! Satan chucked a javelin through Ryan.
Blood seeminglessly pouring from his throat. Ryan started to vomit up fire.
Ryan began to see himself transform. He began to transform into himself. The javelin disappeared and Ryan fell over into a Dark place pit. He was burning to death.
"AUGHHHH!" A tear dripped down Ryan's eye.

"This... was what you will witness my Army of Darkness! We will pound the skulls of little children! We will laugh when people get chucked through cars! We will almost die of the fun of torchering these pathetic twezeers!" Satan's eyes gleamed with fire.

Satan will rise.
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I already have 8 hound books done. :) And Neb our writers name is Solerus!
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:.:Chapter 1:.:


"darnit!" Adam's eyes teared. "Wha' the Dark place is a brick doing here?" Adam rubbed his back. It hurt badly. So badly Adam began to wheeze while tears were splattering out. He cried for his Mom. It sounded Baby-ish, he knows. But he didn't care. He rolled on his side as glass sliced his arm up. He looked up at the sky. Rain was still drenching him, as he watched up at the big hole in the roof. He looked at his sword. No wonder. It was lodged in his left leg.

Adam started to panic and cried alot more. "God darnit!" Tears dripped down. You couldn't really tell that he was crying since the rain blended gracefully as he cried. "Everything sucks ass!" Adam thought. Blood streamed down his ankle. It trickled down his foot. His jaw shivered. It hurt since Logan hit him with those brass knucks.

"Why is everything so f**king hard on me?" Adam cried and sobbed. He wiped his tears and tried to sit up.

He couldn't even sit up. He raised his shirt and a big slice was across his chest. Thick blood covered his whole shirt and some of his hand.

He punched a cardboard box. It fell over on Adam's slice. "AUGNH!!!!!" He cried once more.
Concealed in complete confinement, he cried and cursed. He decided he only had one chance at this.

He pushed the cardboard box off and it fell over. Rain dripped on his chest.
He took off his shirt and put it to the side he took the knife and put it on his shirt. He was going to yank out the sword.

He used the knife to get it out of his leg. He cried alot. "AUGH!!!" It was loose. He yanked it out and there was blood everywhere. He took off his pants and tied the shirt around the huge cut. The shirt went around thrice so it was thick enough to where Adam only saw lose bits of blood here and there.

He was wearing boxers when he tried to get up. He rememberd about his chest. He only had one chance at this. And he was going to regret it.

He took off his boxers and managed to soak up some blood. Rain poured all over him. Great. Naked in the rain. Just what he always had wanted.

He put his pants on back slightly. They were extremly sweaty, muddy, and wet.
He went to the ladder that lead to the blood-filled hallway.
He saw the unused shotgun and picked it up. This was not just for everyone's sake.

It was payback.

Hope you like it :D
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My turn Story will be posted soon butr I need greenday isnpiration.
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Limp Bizkit rocks.
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POST EDITED BY A MOD
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DONT READ THIS IF THE NEXT POST SAYS SKIP...
this is a really cool story and Im just feel like making my own version of what will happen next...if you dont like it just say skip and stuff... and Ill just edit the post and erase it or something.. well here goes

Adam stoped walking towards his house. He stood out in the rain, thinking. "how could I get revenge" he thought
he thought maybe he must have learned something about dark place before in his life.. he thought of what his uncle had told him when he was little.. dont sin or you will go to Dark place! be sinless, and you will go to heaven..

THATS IT! SIN, AND GO TO Dark place!

He saw a little girl walking by.. it wasnt easy what he was about to do.. sin he thought.. sin! he walked up behind her, and cracked her neck. She fell to the ground and lay motionless.
That was the hardest thing adam had ever done in his life.. but it was for what he had to do... pay back!

LETS GET TWEEZIN! BIATCH! He turned the shotgun to his head. Pulled the trigger.


Man, cartoons dont lie about this place being realllly hot! thought adam.
He looked up.. satan was staring at him. He had reached the dark place....
~Yep, you read right.
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Dude, post the next darn part!
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Hmm nice one. Although that will not be part of the story.

Thanks for the compliment.
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This took me forever =P
:.:Chapter 2:.:

Adam looked at himself. He saw someone who was taking over him in rage. He was crying in rage. In fear. He looked around. He knew it wasn't him. If he ttied to get revenge on everyone, he knew he would be in a big position.

When he looked at himself, he dropped the shotgun. The safety wasn't on. The ground hit the floor and it shot a lamp out. He was in the dark now.

"flying butt monkeys," Adam thought to himself. He went outside and looked around. It was still thunderstorming with leaves blowing along the pavement of the rough road. Adam glared at a car driving down the street and stop at a stop sign. It put it's blinker on and turned down on Clark Avenue.

Adam enjoyed looking at things like this. He saw the trees in the wind. The darkness of the sky was like outer-space. It was a really astonishing sight. But now was not the time to worship the nature of Earth.

He walked down the one of the three mini-steps to the cobblestones. His house wasn't for miles. He only had one chance at this. He went back inside and turned on the lightswitch. It was still a puking sight. All the blood and gore. And not to mention that big gaping hole in which Ryan killed Chelsea.

On the table he saw car keys covered in blood. He was going to drive a car.
He picked up the car keys and walked outside.

Adam walked on a limp because of the accident in the attic. The wet grass smooshed against his shoes as he limped across the front lawn. He saw Chelsea's Uncle's 1997 Ford Crown Victoria.

Adam tried every key on the key ring when a small grey key opened the door. It was an automatic car, at least. He put the same key into the ignition. The clock flashed 2:37 A.M.

He put his arm around the back part of the seat and looked behind him. He was dragged foward. He accidentally hit the gas pedal.

Here Adam was. Trying to drive a car when he is 13. And it all started with a freaking phone call threating to kill Adam.
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In Dark place

"We will have our preparations in tact ASAP, Clan," Satan looked around and saw over 125 million red eyes gleaming at him. Like they were under mind control. "We will attack Earth... and we will live the Underworld's dream!"

Satan laughed at this. This was a sign for everyone else to laugh. They all laughed evilly. All 125 Million. Except for one.

Ryan pulled his carcass out of the Pit. He wasn't burned! But how? Maybe because he never died? Uh-oh. He was transforming into the Demon. Only... it was way more powerful. He was really tall. He was Completly dark with gleaming Blue eyes. Flames lighting on the back of his head, flying back because of the high-high humidity of Dark place. In his hand was a huge sword glowing blue and red. In his Left hand an arm larger than his Left arm slumped to the ground. It had 8 Sharp claws. Great for amputating people's legs off.
On his back were two sheaths for sharp battle axes.

Satan stopped laughing suddenly and stared at Ryan. "My name is... Aphaerus!" Ryan's demon form shouted.

The 125 million army of demons all looked behind them.
"If we are going to take over Earth, we better kill this wimp first!" Satan clenched his fist and gritted his teeth.
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:.:Chapter 3:.:

Adam was thinking back about his first phone call. "We are coming for you Adam... just like that punk kid Daniel..." Adam put the gear into "R" and backed up. He turned right to go left.

"Wow this is pretty easy," Adam said putting the gear so he could drive. He was driving along the road when he saw cops. Perfect!

The cops looked at the boy who was driving. Adam stopped the car and ran out to the cops.
The sky was very very dark. A darkish grey. Rain was coming down even worse. The wind howling like a second hurricane Andrew was coming. The cops looked at the boy wierdly and said, "Uhh can we help you?"
"Yeah-- There- Dead- Ryan- Dark place!" Ryan was panicking
"Woha woha woha kid, Ryan Dead?" The cop raised an eyebrow as the second cop took a sip of coffee, waiting for the boys reaction.
"Ok... this caller he killed everyone! I mean... I-" Adam was starting to cry.
"Uh, son wheres your parents?" The second cop put his elbow on the dashboard and listened.
"Don't have any... except my father, who is in Illinois..." Adam looked at the cops. Apparently the two cops had sympathy for him.
"You realize we're in Tennessee?"
"Yes," Adam replied.
The second cop sighed, like this conversation was going nowhere.
"Show us the house you were at son," Said the first cop.
"Get in," demanded the second cop, who sounded like he had a tint of annoyance in his voice.

When they pulled up in the driveway they looked at the house's roof.
"What the Dark place happened to the freaking roof?!" The second cop exclaimed, jaw dropped to his lower throat.
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In Dark place

Aphaerus stood erect. Eyes were red. Calm.
"ATTACK HIM!" Satan yelled, causing rock-slides and killing some of the Dark place-slaves.
Aphaerus's eyebrows went down, eyes grew tense.

"NOVA BLAST!" Aphaerus's body began to light up and a whole buch of lighting formed a circle and killed everyone within a 15 feet radius.

It only killed but 5,000 demons. 124,995,000 to go. Aphaerus looked up. He shut his eyes. His body gleamed in the firey pits of Dark place. He disappeared.
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In Singapore

Aphaerus appeared in an abandoned warehouse in Singapore.
"Where the Dark place am I?" Wondered Aphaerus. He walked out, only to realize... somehow, Satan had attacked here.

Everyone dead, decapitated. Blood on the streets. Bodies impaled on light posts. Heads on flag posts. Necks impaled on spikes. Dark place has obviously striked here, and was moving forward. How Satan got here is unknown. Aphaerus looked around the city.

He looked at the ground. It was going North. He was heading toward Kota Baharu. The border docks between Malyasia and Cambodia. Kota Baharu has a shrine of Keketoke Totakeke; The Ancient God, that was believed to be the devil.
Aphaerus sighed
"I have to warn Adam. Anyone. They will be in deep flying butt monkeys," Aphaerus walked north toward Kota Baharu.


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Apparently this is not taking a liking to anyone?
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Can someone move this to the stories area?
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I am taking a liking.. lol well I am part of your corperation.. but still, its good.
~Yep, you read right.
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If you're reading this, I was bored.
Neb, I like this. Although I like mine better for descriptions and such (big surprise, I'm sure), you have got me OWNED as far as plot. Keep it up. :)
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Yes i see. My descriptions are really "pwnage" :P

As for the plot... you know I made it up talking to myself rofl.
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If you're reading this, I was bored.
Heh. You're not alone there...
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When i was bored I wrote several stories. I will give you the plot for no specific reason.

Odor- A guy has diarrhea problem and he is forced to go camping.
Averned- A wierd college name... but this guy is always getting into trouble and it is hillarious.
Caller I.D.- Welllll i think you know that.
Freak Killer- Another horror flick with people randomly dying.
Homicidal Suicide- Just as wierd as it sounds; This guy is coaxed into a gang, and has to do wierd missions. He kills the mayor, screws up the local water supply, and launches a nuclear missle to Africa. This had like 15 different books. All focused on one mission. (Usually like 10 pages, front and back)

And that's all i can think of now o.o

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