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| Jaks Corruption; By Jak the Savior | |
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| Topic Started: Oct 12 2007, 06:07 PM (64 Views) | |
| Hellonearth | Oct 12 2007, 06:07 PM Post #1 |
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Note: This is not my work. If your from Animal Forest you would know the man. He never wrote them there but he did on my forum. Here is his story he made...Jaks Corruption.... part 1 The year is 2067 and a man was being taken away to a special prison for what just happened minutes earlier. This man's name is John Stationary, he is 6"5 and has brown hair. He was retired from the military two years ago and always served to the best of his being. He was walking home from his new work place like he normally did, but something was different because he was near his house when a man ran out holding a gun. The man was dressed in mostly black and had a gray mask on. Not even one little part of his skin was seen. John ran inside his house and could not believe the horror he witnessed. Debra Stationary, who was his wife, was on the ground loosely holding a warm frying pan and had two bullet wounds in her head. He bent down to grab one of her hands. When he was holding it he put it up to him and kissed it. " I loved and I will make sure who did this pays." It just occurred to him to check on David and Linda Stationary, his children, he ran up stairs and into his David's room. He was laying on the floor, John ran to him and said " David! David wake up! " When John turned him over he jumped back as he saw that David who was 15 and 6"2 with long and black hair and green eyes was stabbed several times in his chest. John was sitting on the floor pushing himself away from the body as Linda barely walked in the room. She had blue eyes and was 6 years old, she was 4"2 and had short blonde hair. She was walking to John and said " Daddy... save me--" She fell over and died. John ran to her to hold her and saw that she had a bloody knife sticking out of her back. John walked down stairs and sat down in a chair that was stained with blood. Why would someone do this? Who could have done this? He slowly put his hands over his face and began to cry just when a SWAT team came in and arrested him. He showed no resistance and allowed them to take him to the prison that was on an island somewhere near the Caribbean. He was then put into a cell where they would then ponder if it was safe to keep him alive. There was a big room with a table that could have 24 people sit at it. There were only 4 people n the room though. A doctor began to say something " I think we should just execute him. " A psychologist said, " No! I have developed Technology that could place his memory on a CD. " A general said, " Well... that could be good to do, but is there anyway that he could get his memory back? " The psychologist said, " We do not have a machine and we could hold him here to see if it would gradually come back or not. " The last man who seem to be there just to be there said, " Doesn't matter, that son of a BITCH is going to rot here no matter what. " The meeting seem to be over and they went to get John. John was escorted to the room where he would they would wipe his memory. The guard walked over to the cell and began to speak, " John... Stationary, I am here to escort you to another cell. " John spoke, " It does not matter, I can rot here for the rest of my life for all I care. Hey... wait a minute... aren't you Jazz from military squad 244057? " The guard looked surprised. " Why yes I am... I thought your name sounded familiar! John shook his hand and grabbed the cuff links that Jazz was holding. I know you don't think I didn't do it but it is probably code that you have to cuff me." " I'm sorry John it it code but who do you think did it? " " I do not know. " They walked down a hall that brought them to the mind wipe room. part 2 John and Jazz walked down a lot of halls before they actually got to their destination. What was about to happen was going to change everything for the best or the worst. John was led into a room with a metal bed right in the middle of it. "So this is the special cell huh... It sucks actually. "John just stood there waiting for a reply but jazz had already left the room to attend to a fight in the courtyard. John went to sit in a corner of the room and just try to get over it all because he was going to spend the rest of his life there. John fell asleep and had a dream about when he was with his family. It was a couple weeks after Linda had been born and John was playing David in a game of Mario Kart 64 on a antique Nintendo 64. He remembered He played a man with a green hat and terribly lost to David because he never played a Nintendo before and they bought it off some weird guy on eBay. Debra walked into the room and told them that it was time for dinner. John was happy to get into his kitchen and sit down with the family he worked so hard to make and how it was perfect in it's own little way. little Linda began to cry and John went up to calm her down. He was up there with her for more than an hour when he came back Debra put his plate in their microwave. John was going to finish it later because David had already asked him to play a game that John got from his great grandfather, The games name was Splinter Cell: Chaos Theory and John had fun playing it when he was a little kid but before he gave the game to his son he went to a store to get the scratches taken away and the game disk fixed then he gave it to David as a birthday present. John remembered a lot and his dream seemed to go on for hours but he was awakened to the sound of clanking metal and a cold sensation on his back. Everything was blurry and he was afraid. He came to a conclusion that he was in and operating room of some kind but there weren't and doctors just lights and strange sounds. He discovered that he was wearing a weird helmet type thing and could not move his hands in any way at all; he was strapped down to a table in a strange room. He had seen too many sci-fi movies with David and Linda to know that this was a good thing and he tired to get out harder but he couldn't and the last thing he heard before he went blank was "Start the machine!" and it all went blank again. part 3 When John awoke he did not remember anything at all not even his name, He was in a small white room laying on the floor. The door to the room opened and a man came in a talked to John for little bit. Upon talking to this man for a while he learned the man's name and his own name. The man was short and bald with a beer gut and a purple suit on, his name was Harry and he was supposed to see if John could remember anything. " John, you have been sick but he have taken care of you and made you better." " What was wrong with me Harry and why can't I remember anything... what year is it?" " The year is 2067 John." John got a horrified look on his face and started to ask more questions. " No, no, no! Just yesterday it was 30th and I was going to ask Debra to... Oh god where is Debra now?" " I am sorry John but Debra is dead she has been dead for 12 years." " No! That is a lie! I don't believe you!" John got up and began to hit the wall fiercely and began to cry. Harry walked out of the room and went to see General Alexander and tell him to lock up the CD in a place where no one would find it. Over the next few days John did not want to even live anymore, he just wanted to die but he had to find out what happened in the past 27 years so he had to do his best in everything they made him do. After 3 days he realized that he was in a prison, after 5 he learned that it was a maximum security meant for those who were deemed too dangerous to be alive, after 8 he became friends with those who also were in the memory wipe program but yet he still had no idea why he was in a prison in the middle of the ocean with the most dangerous people on the in America. On the 9th day he recognized a big time criminal from when he was in his teens, he went up to talk to him but it was the same with him he could not remember anything and thought he was 14 years old. This was when John realized something was up everyday after that more and more people he knew were losing their memory and he wasn't sure why this was happening or anything at all until a guard got a little cocky and slipped some information about the memory wipe to John on accident. John knocked out the guard and took him to a dark place and began to use skills he got from his father with "negotiating" John put a silencer on the gun and shot the guard in the foot. " Tell me what the hell is going on!" " Please stop! I have 3 kids at home!" " Tell me and I will let you go." John shot him in the arm and the guard screamed. " Tell me and I will let you go!" " Alright just please don't shoot me again. We brought you here to keep you away from society and lock you possibly going to kill you." The guard was whimpering as he was talking and having tears role down his face from the intense pain he received from the gun. " You were put in project "Amnesia" and had your memory wiped." John looked at the guard and asked another question. " What did I do to come here?" " You killed your son, wife, and daughter," he almost passed out but began to talk again " David, Debra, and Linda Stationary." John couldn't believe what he heard at all, he knocked out the guard and brought him to the medic. The medic was a black man who spent 18 years in medical school just so he could learn how to treat most of the sicknesses there were. " What the hell happened to him." John replied back " he let me se his gun and I accidentally shot him in the arm, i dropped the gun and it fired a bullet into his foot." Clearly lying, John told this to the medic and he believed it. What John was going to do over the next few weeks would change everything, but could he actually find out what happened and possibly get his memory back. part 4 The guard died from shock, it seems that he had never been shot before or even used a gun for that matter. John felt kinda bad but he knew he had to do it to get his memory back but he still couldn't believe that he had lost so much of his memory. He was walking down the hall when a guy jumped out in front of him and hit him in the face. "SHIT!" he yelled out as he fell to the floor. "Mother *censored* why you trying to get out without us?" "What... do you mean?" the guy got on his knees and pulled John up to him by the shirt. "I heard that you shot a guard and got info on how to escape." While holding on to John's shirt he pulled himself back to his legs. "Mother *censored* don't play dumb with me!" John finally recovered from the hit and decided to play this out a little bit. "So what's it to ya if I did?" "Bad move!" He let one of his hands go and formed it into a fist. John kicked him in the crotch and he fell over. While the big man was in pain John punched him in the side of the face. After this he started kicking him harshly in the stomach. John continued walking down the hall and stopped a little feet away from the man. "I don't care weather I leave this place or not. I just want to have my memory back." He was walking for a long time and it seemed he was unknowing of where he wanted to go but finally he found a door that said staff only. John walked slowly to the door and twisted the knob. It was unlocked which was unusual. John thought whatever and opened the door. When he saw inside he was shocked there were dead inmates everywhere. "What the hell happened here?" John looked around the room and noticed that allot of blood had been spilled as well. He went looking for the main room for his memory and he walked for a long time. He actually started to think that not someone but something had did this to the inmates. He had a creepy feeling and became paranoid, but he wouldn't stop looking for the main control room. After awhile the paranoia wen away and he thought he was safe but he was dead wrong... something... had been following him and it wasn't human. Finally John found the main control room and there was a man who was missing his lower half. He ran over to the man as fast as he could. "What happened to you?" he said but the man only raised his arm and pointed toward the ceiling. John looked up and saw a creature. It roared at him and dropped from ceiling. John quickly rolled to his left and looked at the monster. He heard horrible screams from the man and ran for the door but it grabbed his leg with it's huge arm. John started kicking at the thing's arm, but it wouldn't let go. It held him up in the air and was about to bite right into John's torso. John was smart though, he waited for the monster's head to get close and he punched it right in the eye. It threw him at a wall and starting screaming in pain. John used this as a moment to get the hell out of there. He just closed the door when it was already there beating on it from the other side finally this gave John a chance to run. He ran as fast as he could but it was only a minute and a half before the creature busted open the door. "Damn It!" he yelled as he was trying to find a place to hide. The creature was just sniffing around with it's huge nose. It picked up a scent and started moving at an incredible speed. John hid himself in a janitors closet and the creature ran right by it. He was once again relieved but this lasted for only a short while. He left the closet and moved the opposite direction as the monster. John was walking down the hallway trying not to make too much noise and he was doing pretty good. He found a walkway that let you look at the inmates below but there was more blood and partial bodies everywhere it looked like something right out of a scifi movie. John was so shocked by this that he nearly SHIT bricks. He looked everywhere down there and noticed something moving, it was blueish with white fur all around. It had two huge arms about fourteen feet long, it's legs were longer but bent with nine inch claws on both it's feet and it's hands. It had four black little eyes with the biggest teeth you've ever seen. It was searching through the bodies and when John was sure it did not see him he sneezed and it looked around the room. it jumped right onto a glass window and it looked around the room from behind the glass. John was cleverly hidden beneath the sil so that the thing couldn't see him. It went away and John ran like hell to the other side of the hall just barely making it before it looked back over at the hall. John was in a strange room with a lot of PO-CDs one that one on a console caught his attention. John walked over to the computer and held up the PO-CD and on the back of it the PO-CD read John Stationary. He put the PO-CD in the console and a helmet came and dropped on his head and it was almost instant memory. He grabbed the helmet and threw it to the floor. "It is good to be back." Just then a knife was thrown by a man in a dark shadow. The knife just barely missed him. "Special training is good to remember now who are you." He heard laughing coming from the shadows and a figure walked out from a corner of the room. "My name is terry and I am the reason why you went through this hell with amnesia." John was confused and thought about it for awhile. "So you killed my family did ya? Well I am going to make sure that you are going to burn in hell for that but I only have one question." Terry walked closer and began to cough a lot. "Yeah, what is it." John pulled out the knife from the console. "Why did you do it?" "To test two experiments a-" The creature busted through a wall and bit off Terry's head. John yelled out "SHIT!" and ran toward the door, but it blocked the door. part 5 John just stared at the creature trying not to make any sudden movements. He finally decided f**k it and ran toward the monster. It ran to him too opening it's huge frightening jaws, John just barely missed it's maw by sliding under it and getting out of the room. He slammed the door shut and lit a fire in front to give him some time. The creature was too big to get through the door without getting burned. John ran down the hallway and into the riot control room. He looked everywhere but there were no guns. He was about to give up when he smelled the scent of burned flesh and looked outside the window of the door. All he needed was a quick glance and saw that it was the monstrosity again. It was looking very curiously at the door. It was looking through the small glass window and searched the room with it's vision. John was hiding right next to the door as close to the wall as he could get. It looked away and John was somewhat relieved but now was not the time to dilly dally, he walked over near other side of the room and checked one last time when he heard a humongous bang and the room shook a little. He quickly looked behind him and noticed that it was in the room right next to this one. There were two more bangs and it left the room seemed to have left the room but that wasn't concerning John at the moment. What he was looking at could be his only salvation to this hell... it was a 7 inch hunting knife. John ran over and grasped on the hilt, ordinarily he hated the site of a knife but he was thanking the lord that he found this one. He started to think maybe the creature knocked it off of the top of something or out of something when he wasn't looking but then again maybe it didn't. He didn't care that much, but now he had a chance. John slowly opened the door and left the room he was looking down the hallway when he found his way back to the main control room. He was looking at all the security cameras when he realized he was out on an island in the middle of nowhere two hundred feet underground. This disturbed him a little bit but he went looking more and more. Upon realizing he was underground he also the lab where he lost his memory. He thought this was the only safe place inside the entire prison but he went looking again and stumbled upon a door that said "Level 8 Security" the door was busted so he just walked right in and found enough of the creatures to make an army. They were all in tubes which appeared to be full of liquid. He thought once again that this came from an old scifi movie, this was not CG I or fake... this was real. He was looking everywhere inside to find a place with more weapons or something. He didn't find anything but an old friend... The creature lunged down from the ceiling and tried to bite him in the shoulder, John just slashed at it's mouth and cut a hole in the side. It screamed and ran away for the time being. "I need to find away to destroy this island and kill all of these creatures." part 6 John was running down a hallway. He had just gotten out of the main room with all of the clones of that thing. John did not know what to do, he ran as if it were the last day on earth. Something was bugging him though, "How am I going to kill these things? There are too many to kill one by one." As John was running down the hall he heard an all too familiar scream. It was coming faster and faster. John knocked down a couple of barrels to make sure that it was harder to trace him. It just jumped over the barrels and slashed John in the back. "Damn It!" he yelled out in pain. It was right above him teeth dripping and the monster decided it was time for John to die. It brought it's arm in the air and made it lunge down at John. He quickly rolled over only getting a minor scratch in the leg. When John got up he realized that the creatures arm was stuck in the floor. He pulled out the blade and jumped at the creature. It was biting for him, but john stabbed it right in the head. The monster let a roar of pain and fell over dead. "Gotcha BITCH." John said triumphantly. He looked down at the monster pleased with himself, but now wasn't the time to party. John continued running for the main control room. He was almost there when once again he heard the creature scream. John looked confused and thought to himself, "How did it survive?" No matter John ran inside and locked both doors. Once done he was looking at the terminal. "Damn it! Where is the self-destruct pattern?!" He was looking all over the terminal when he found it. A big red button with the words "Do Not Touch" on it. He broke open the glass encasing and hit the button. This button did not destroy the place though. He was looking all over terminal again. Several minutes passed by and then John realized what he just did. Thousands of roars and screams were coming from the depths. He just decided to hit all of the buttons and hope for the best. It took him three minutes and he just decided to hit the computer. Once again he pulled out the blade and started hacking at the computer. Finally, the alarm went off and the self-destruct was activated. He ran out of the room and ran straight for the exit. Almost three months in here and he still barely knew the place, but he was headed in the right direction. He ran and ran, it sounded like the screams were coming from everywhere. Then he saw them. They were everywhere, and they were coming for him. Left and right he was dodging claws, teeth, and whatever else they tried. He finally made it to the door with 6 minutes to spare to get out. He shut the door and went into the elevator. It took two minutes for the elevator to get all of the way out of ground and he felt somewhat relieved. He walked out of the elevator, just one long hallway and he was safe and out of there. When he got outside of the door he went to his knees and began to cry. "It's so beautiful," he said with his face buried in his hands." The island began to shake and there was a loud voice that came on. "One minute to self-destruction." He saw a helicopter and started to run toward it but what he saw next was ruined all he had left of surviving. Three of the creatures had gotten to the above ground. All three of them jumped and ran at John. Angered, John scream and pulled out the blade. He was running toward the middle one. He jumped and on of them bit him in the arm, another bit him on the leg. With his free hand he stabbed the one he was going after right in the throat. "Self-Destruct, Good Bye" and instantly the whole island went up into flames. Nothing on this island survived. John had one and succeeded but with the cost of his life. Not that many people know what happened there. John was a hero but no one would ever know it. His amnesia in his hell had been stopped, he killed every last one of them. Every last one. END |
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| Paul | Oct 13 2007, 10:29 AM Post #2 |
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Yeah, I read this on that one place... Its alright. Kinda corny though.. |
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| Hellonearth | Oct 13 2007, 02:45 PM Post #3 |
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Was it on a nintendo site? If so..... HELLO! ITS A ME! :D |
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| Paul | Oct 13 2007, 04:27 PM Post #4 |
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Yes, it was on a Nintendo Site, I forgot the name though, I think it was a Freewebs thing. |
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| Hellonearth | Oct 13 2007, 05:23 PM Post #5 |
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DING DING DING! You are correct! Your prize is this BEAUTIFUL url link to it http://www.freewebs.com/jakthesavior/stories.htm |
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| Paul | Oct 13 2007, 09:45 PM Post #6 |
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LoL, I already went there ;p |
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