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| Equality of The Sexes; Is it worth it? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 30 2004, 12:17 PM (84 Views) | |
| TBlack | Oct 30 2004, 12:17 PM Post #1 |
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I was just wondering if anyone thought It would be worth it to try and push it through. Is it necessary? Is it any good?
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| _Myopia_ | Oct 30 2004, 05:20 PM Post #2 |
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Autonecromancer extraordinaire
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I like it, go for it. May I just offer some points to tidy it up a bit? I know some are a little pedantic on grammar etc., but I think it's worth fixing them.
When this is re-stated at the end, it's referred to as a "Law" not an "act" - which is it? Also, you could quote the date of passage of the Sexes Rights resolution.
If you can fit it in, a quote of this would be helpful
Should be a comma not a full stop.
Line break not meant to be there. Also, I'm not sure genitalia can be put in the singular.
Is this necessary given that 2b merely "calls upon"? Once these are cleared up I don't think would be any problem with this at all. |
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| TBlack | Oct 30 2004, 05:26 PM Post #3 |
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It would be Law. the one at the top was a half finished sentence which makes me think I have another version (updated) around here… Lady Desdemona of Merwell, Senior UN representative, The Black New World |
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| Knootoss | Oct 30 2004, 10:22 PM Post #4 |
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Does this not interfere with the UN-established Right that the State does not interfere with abortions in any way? |
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~Aram Koopman, Knootian ambassador to the WA "If the United Nations is a country unto itself, then the commodity it exports most is words." | |
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| _Myopia_ | Oct 31 2004, 01:17 PM Post #5 |
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Autonecromancer extraordinaire
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That's a good point. We have no way of stopping abortions based simply on gender. We need to get that damn thing repealed and replaced with something less extreme. |
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| TBlack | Oct 31 2004, 04:28 PM Post #6 |
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I'll add a definition of infanticide. How about:
Yeah that's not very good. Any ideas. Lady Desdemona of Merwell, Senior UN representative, The Ranting New World |
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| _Myopia_ | Oct 31 2004, 05:18 PM Post #7 |
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Autonecromancer extraordinaire
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Actually, because of the definition of infant, I don't think this IS a problem:
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| Knootoss | Nov 3 2004, 07:23 PM Post #8 |
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yup. better now. |
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