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JUST READ THIS!; skaven story
Topic Started: 29th June 2007 - 08:13 AM (278 Views)
afchis


chapter one: the plan

A group of skaven huddled together in a small corner of a cavern that was compleatly filled with others of their kind, all of the assembled gathering were facing an upraised section of the floor that acted as a primitave stage. atope the stage a grey seer was addressing the sea of living fur and flesh, " my kin-rats " the seer said,
" you have been gathered here-here so that you might fullfil the will-will of the mighty horned rat! you will destroy-kill the pitiful man-thing city above us and gain-gain the favour of the horned one!"
as the seer said this a wild cheer erupted from the masses of rat's gathered below him, continuing on and on until guards came in to restore quit in case the human's noticed anything
" yes-yes destroy them you will, but first-first we must-must see to preperation's of war-war, you will be fed-fed for now but all of you must-must listen to overseer's until time-time to fight!"
the order was taken to heart as many guard's came flooding in, there were even a few rat ogre's, it seemed the seer was taking no chance's with possible mutiny.
one guard detached itself from the horde and beckoned to the group in the corner,
they followed the guard down a tunnel and into a much smaller cave, it was also much better funished they noted, with warpstone hammered into the wall's in an open display of wealth. the grey seer was already there, " none of you-you know why-why i wanted you-you here yes? well-well i am going to-to need the man-thing's to be weak-weak and poisoned and starving for the invasion-fight, so you will tunnel-tunnel in and poison food-food and water for me yes-yes?payment will-will be 350 warpstone-stone tokens." you could almost here the gutter runners drooling, it was a generous offer and they could always use the other's as scapegoat's for a failure. " any-rat that back's off-off" the grey seer continued, " will be kill-killed" the gutter runner's instantly became more alert, watching for trap's. " klik-klik " the seer said to one of the guards, obiously a captain if the warpstone-forged blade by his side were anything to judge by, "escort the... volunteer's to the man-city would you?" the gurd turned around sharply and, prodding the team none to gently, lead them to the city above.


i will be doing this story in little bit's at a time, if you have any suggestion's for the story ill be happy to hear them.
sorry about any spelling mistakes i made.
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"he's retarded!" "ya. but at least he doesnt read books all day." "exactly! hes retarded!"


(wolt in back from the hospital)
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those minutes between me calling my girlfriends mother and the whole team-112 force came to my rescue i crawled up to my only possesion i had closeby (and not actually on me) wich was.

the chocolade.


Awesome rpg site: http://z3.invisionfree.com/The_Nether/index.php?act=idx
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Ok, that was a nice story. A good effort for a first time thing. Fix a few of the spelling errors and you've got a good introduction.

I'm moving your topic to the fanfic forum by the way. This one is reserved for roleplaying 'games' ;) .

Cheers,
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afchis


sorry about the wrong site thing just didnt know any other one, and thanks for the complement :D
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and one day the bunnies will pour forth from the earth...


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"he's retarded!" "ya. but at least he doesnt read books all day." "exactly! hes retarded!"


(wolt in back from the hospital)
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those minutes between me calling my girlfriends mother and the whole team-112 force came to my rescue i crawled up to my only possesion i had closeby (and not actually on me) wich was.

the chocolade.


Awesome rpg site: http://z3.invisionfree.com/The_Nether/index.php?act=idx
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afchis


chapter 2: the city

the guard gave a final gurgle as the noose slid away from his throat, behind him stood slitis; the leader of the gutter runner team that was lurking behind him in the shadow's. " kisk!" he snarled, " hide this body, the rest of you follow me!" with that he crawled across the stone's of the road and across the small garden wall on the other side, he was followed so closely by the other's that had someone seen them they would have sworn they saw a stream of black pour across the road. " kisk!" slitis said again, " get over here quickly fool!"
muttering to himself, kisk started to walk across the road when a patrolling guadsmen saw him and began to yell " stop! assassins in the city! assassins in the city!" after his violent outburst of shouting the guard charged the startled kisk.
kisk, realising that the plan was already blown, jumped over the guard's clumsy thrust with the halberd he was carrying and shouted for his com-rat's to join him " help-help me! hurry up-up!" once again jumping over a thrust of a halbered, kisk saw his com-rat's dissapering into the shadow's, leaving him to the guard's that were quickly swarming into the street. kisk doged a blow from the halbered that would have cut him in half, he then jumped forward and quickly stabbed the surprised guard in the neck, ending his life instantly. turning to face the guard's behind him, kisk, seeing that he was going to die very quickly against such odd's, began to yell after his fleeing com-rat's " horned one curse you! if i survive than i will kill all of you! do you hear me! all of you! yyyaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!" it was the last his com-rat's ever heard of him. soon the entire city was full of guard's runnig every wich way and trying not to bump into each other. " bungler, fool, idot!" one of the runner's muttered to himself " if he could have just-just stayed unseen all would have worked out-out, but no had to rouse half of man-city with clumsieness! now we all die!" finding a safe spot in the corner of a large square, the gutter runner's wich now only numbered four, began to cunsult each other on what best to do. :pmaster:

sorry about gutter runner dieing so dramtically, alway's loved theatric's and drama :D
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and one day the bunnies will pour forth from the earth...


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"he's retarded!" "ya. but at least he doesnt read books all day." "exactly! hes retarded!"


(wolt in back from the hospital)
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those minutes between me calling my girlfriends mother and the whole team-112 force came to my rescue i crawled up to my only possesion i had closeby (and not actually on me) wich was.

the chocolade.


Awesome rpg site: http://z3.invisionfree.com/The_Nether/index.php?act=idx
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afchis


due to some technical problems i will be unable to complete this story anybody else fell free to expand or finish it :pmaster:
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and one day the bunnies will pour forth from the earth...


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"he's retarded!" "ya. but at least he doesnt read books all day." "exactly! hes retarded!"


(wolt in back from the hospital)
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those minutes between me calling my girlfriends mother and the whole team-112 force came to my rescue i crawled up to my only possesion i had closeby (and not actually on me) wich was.

the chocolade.


Awesome rpg site: http://z3.invisionfree.com/The_Nether/index.php?act=idx
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