| Orc Problems; DeVreekz Returns! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: 16th May 2007 - 08:38 PM (179 Views) | |
| Azhtabak | 16th May 2007 - 08:38 PM Post #1 |
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Packlord Azhtabak
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A bit of a short first part, but the rest will be better and longer, I assure you. Involving plenty of DeVreekz running away like...well, a skaven. DeVreekz sprinted towards the orc encampment, his ratty footfalls light and soundless. The giant guarding the camp looked back and forth stupidly, tossing his club in the air. It fell back down and hit him on the head, dazing him Quickly, DeVreekz darted under the giant, leaping upwards to grab the loincloth. He span round it once, before swinging himself off it and into the camp, over the wooden palisade surrounding it. The giant turned round with a confused “Gwuh?” but DeVreekz was already gone. He quickly scaled down the side of the wooden palisade, crouching at the bottom and scanning the area to assess the situation. On his left, a group of goblin archers drilled relentlessly, while on his right, a battalion of metal-clad orc warriors marched back and forth, banging their shields and shouting a battle cry. The wind carried it to DeVreekz’ ears. “Ah dun know but ah’ve bin shoutid ‘at, cleanin’ bogz is really borin’!” Unusual for orcs, though DeVreekz. Far too organised. Something bigger was at work here. Machinations far beyond the orcs’ understandings were at play. DeVreekz gaze quickly located a hidden route further into the camp. He pressed himself against the palisade and edged round, throwing himself backwards over it as he reached the other side. He landed on a goblin, who emitted a high-pitched “oof!” Before the goblin could alert anyone, DeVreekz quickly dispatched him with a blade to the throat. Scuttling towards a large tent in the camp, DeVreekz silently cut his way through it. Inside the tent were a pair of goblins, one with a highly decorated staff. Calmly, DeVreekz walked up to the goblin without a staff and beheaded him. The goblin mage opposite him leapt up with shock, purple mushrooms exploding from his ears in surprise. As DeVreekz watched, bemused, he hopped up and down on one leg, waving his staff in circles. The air began to hum with energy. DeVreekz dived out of the way, as, in a giant fuchsia explosion, the goblin vanished. DeVreekz got to his feet and shrugged. One orc down, two to go. From outside the tent came the sounds of orc swords clattering. Intrigued, DeVreekz hopped out of the tent and went to investigate. Likely, another of his targets was there. Hope you like it
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| Plagress | 24th May 2007 - 01:55 PM Post #2 |
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Clanrat
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Its a good short story. |
| Life is like a bolt of lightning. Short but our stories continue live on without us even when the world comes unto the end. | |
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| Azhtabak | 24th May 2007 - 02:22 PM Post #3 |
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Packlord Azhtabak
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Thanks. And the next chapter will be up tonight - for real this time, too
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