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Madness Part 4
Topic Started: 25th September 2006 - 05:50 PM (209 Views)
Chris
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"Who am i?" John thought. "What am i?" he continued. I sudden motion said that he should think about shorth things with beards at this moment, but he couldtn find a word. "Dwarf." Yes thats the word. But what is a dwarf?
There his mind seemed to suddenly block.
The master was away, seemingly to a city named Marienburg. He had take with him the big ogre IGOOOR. Which he thought was good, because then the master wouldnt continue his experiments, or torture as Big John saw it.
He didnt know why but that name seemed strange, but he didnt care about it because he heard footsteps outside the masters lab.
He had been given clear orders, he and Li'l John. And the packmasters with whips but they where currently sleeping. Should kill ANY intruders, except if they said the secret password. It was so secret that they hadnt been told it.
Big John and Li'l John was on their guard, when they heard the voices of the intruders.
"Dooooom..."
"Shut up, its this lab we should go to."
"Doooooooom!"
"I do remember correctly, there is no reason do question my intelligence. I dont only communicate by saying "Doooom" all the time."
"DOOOM?!"
"Oh you wanna fight, eh?"
Big John heard whips and the door to the lab was crushed in. He saw a very big rat ogre, it had two heads...
Big John recognised those heads, and the voices. They where the two arguing humans which had been in the same slaven carriage on their way here. He laughed a little when he saw that they had been sawn together, a more terrible fate was hard to imagine.
Big John suddenly thought about some of his masters experiments. It could be worse fates, the mutations could go wrong.

The two humans in the rat ogre body, entered the lab, with only minor whip swings. The packmasters woke up, their head still beating because of the skavenade.
"Bugger-bugger." one of them whispered
"Johns," another whispered another "Attack."
They had little choise because the packmasters had already found their whips.
They attacked an dthey clashed with the human-rat-ogre-thingy.
"Havent i seen you before?" Big John said while swinging his ogre arm which was on his stomach against the humans.
"Arent you the dwarf we saw on the slave carriage?" the sane human soldier said while swinging his fang against Big John.
"Yeah i thought it was that, is your friend gotten better?"
"No, he still only Says *doom*, and 'friend'?" he said while headbutting Li'l John. He regretted that later.
"Doooom?!" the flaggelant head said.
"Oh he gets so let insulted, dunno why..." the soldier head said dizzingly.
Then suddenly Li'l John swinged his massive paw against the heads, the was ripped of and threwn into one of the weird big glasses of the master.
Big John then ripped open the gut of the body, because it still moved.
"Now back-back into cages." said one of the packmasters which seemingly had gotten sober and wondered how we escaped in the first place.
One word: Skavenade.



What do you think?

Chris
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Lord Lughtigern
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The Mad Ratter.

It's good, but a little too cartooney, methinks...

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I think the two later parts where a little to serius, but that was becaus what was happening was more serius. The other parts i will try make more like the first.


I see where you're coming from, I think this is my fault partially..! When I said that it was great fun, it is, but the serious story has a place in it too, you know..?

Nope? You say I'm rambling incoherently? ;)

Happens to the best of us!
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Links you should try out:
Denizens of the Deep - Rules for Underground Campaigns
Warhammer Skirmish - The Lazy Man's Mordheim
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