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| EvilClown | 5th July 2006 - 07:52 PM Post #1 |
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The Malicious Joker
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Hey all, the Clown's back with another self-written story This time it is about Skaven, especially written for you guys A foul stench came from the Cauldron of a Thousand Poxes. The very essence of disease swirled over it like it like a stinking fog cloud, and all manner of insects were drawn to its evil scent. In the cauldron was a substance which smelled like a rotting cadaver which had died of Lepra three weeks ago. A substance which could kill a mortal merely by touching it. A substance blessed by the Horned Rat itself. The Skaven around the Cauldron were immune to its deadly effects though. All of them were dressed in filthy, muddy robes, and most were leaning on croaked staffs.Their bloated skin was hideously deformed by the many poxes and plagues that infested them, and yet they didn't seem to suffer from this. Some of of them carried great flails filled with fuming noxious gases, and despite the endless chittering the Plague Monks and the countless little rats around them, all became silent when a single Skaven stepped into the room, which was filled with half destroyed Dwarven statues and the rotting corpses of the Dawi themselves. The newly arrived Skaven was even more heavily robed than the others, so that one could not see it's face, apart from it's eyes and snout. It leaned on a large, rusted scythe, with bells hanging on the dirty weapon. From it's robes hung all kind of trophies, such as boil-infested severed heads, eyeballs with a sickly yellow colour, and other things that were probabaly once body parts, but could no longer be recognized as anything that once belonged to a human being. It's grey fur was so boil-ridden and under the pus that one could no longer see it's original colour. But the most malicious thing about this Skaven were his eyes; brightly shining green spots in a face that was so dark otherwise. ''Bring in the Dwarf-thing...'' Another door opened, and an unconscious Dwarf was dragged along by two Plague Monks. His nose was bleeding, but was otherwise unharmed. As the Monks stopped straight for the cauldron, the heavily robed Skaven leader started chanting words, pointing first at the Cauldron, then at the Dwarf, and then at the Cauldron again, the Dwarf was borne aloft like a feather into the air, quickly released by the Monks. The Dwarf was now floating above the fuming Cauldron...and he woke up. Shrieking the last of his foul words, the Priest stamped on the groun with his scythe, before suddenly falling silent. The Dwarf looked fearfull around him, before, with a scream, he was dropped into the Cauldron. At first it seemed nothing special happened, but then the Dwarf started screaming even louder than before, as the substance within the Cauldron started to flow over him, slididng into his nose, eyes and ears. The Dwarf sank ever deeper into the Cauldron of a Thousand Poxes, and indeed, poxes was what he got, and boils, and blood mixed with pus coming out several small cracks into his head. Amazingly, the Dwarf was still alive, but wished not to be, suffering agonizing pain. Then he emerged again, but didn't look like his former self at all anymore; he rather looked like a rotting cadaver which had died of Lepra three weeks ago. ''The sacrifice has been-been made!'', the Plague Priest screamed, and as one, the Skaven of Clan Pestilens started chittering and cheering. Please tell me what ya think of it
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| Warwolt the disturbed assassin | 6th July 2006 - 10:17 PM Post #2 |
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D00M WH33L 1337 R1D3R
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Ah! Amazing, the details are very good! Really like the description when the dwarf dies of the you-look-like-a-rotting-cadaver-which-had-died-of-Lepra-three-weeks-ago deasice
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| Bassik Dwarveripper | 6th July 2006 - 10:19 PM Post #3 |
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Its very cool, and the description of the Dwarves death is very saddistic, I like it. A bit short though, but on the other paw, that makes it such a good read during work, school, or love making! |
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| EvilClown | 7th July 2006 - 07:22 PM Post #4 |
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The Malicious Joker
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Thanks ladz I'll try and make my next story a bit bigger though, it was indeed a bit short
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| Demagorgon | 1st August 2006 - 08:49 AM Post #5 |
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Demaaaaargh
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Nicely done; I like the use of repetition and the description of the plaguepriest. It's really clear, it'd make a good conversion if it's not already based on one Look forward to reading more stuff by you.
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| lashific the Dominator | 29th August 2006 - 04:04 AM Post #6 |
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kicking snow since IC 134
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nice work! hey anyone who reads this plz chec my storie {preview} "lashific the dominator" that the topic and story name! lol ive included the first page of currently about ten. hoping to make about 30-50! chec it out!
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This time it is about Skaven, especially written for you guys




Look forward to reading more stuff by you.

