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The Rising Of Clan Malokrit; CHAPTER SEVEN: Boredom
Topic Started: 12th June 2006 - 08:57 PM (383 Views)
skavenguy13
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This is something I always wanted to do/write. YES it goes with the story, even though you'll think "WTF WTF WTF WTF WTF". I thought it would be boring as hell, but after writing it, I don't think it will be really boring to read. Anyway...

The rest of the story:
http://underempire.net/index.php?showtopic=12326

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CHAPTER SEVEN
Boredom

Once again, light could be seen from the tundra. But its inhabitants had the pay the price for it. What breached through the dark matter over them also sliced into the white land. The beasts from the East were separated from the ones that lived on the other side as their land was drifting farther away.

The beasts living in the West side died when immense lava floods burned them. They were all swept away in minutes, taken away from their land. Their corpses all drifted to where the land was shattered, but it was too late to reach the East coast. Their land was shaken greatly and finally stopping moving, but only few had not yet died and all hope was lost.

Those living on the East side of the tundra were all safe, or so they thought. Slowly, lava came to them too, but took only few creatures in its path. The beasts panicked, but they could still fight for their lives. Those that were close enough to the breach saw the light and died immediately; the others tried to find a way to fill the breach as soon as possible.

The source of the lava was farther to the east, but it was the only way to go to seek help. The fastest monsters were dispatched in this direction to find any useful resource. In the meantime, those from the Eastern land were fighting the lava with everything they could find. Many were taken away by the burning liquid and even more died trying to repair the dark matter that protected them from the outside world.

It took very little time for reinforcements to arrive. Special forces came from near the volcano to help filling the breach. But they were still extremely slow and many more died in agony, even some of the reinforcements.

The special forces quickly stopped arriving, even though a very small number made it to this land. Apparently, two of the three other realms were divided in two and the immense volcano was sending lava faster than ever through the small tunnels.

Messengers soon brought even more bad news: the last two realms had just suffered the same fate. Even the strange land, that didn’t follow any law of their world nor of the Upper Kingdom, wasn’t spared.

Speaking of which, the Upper Kingdom, with its dominant monsters, was also in trouble. This land was very particular since it could control four of the realms, only the strange fifth realm didn’t pledge allegiance to them. The kingdom was still connected to the main land, but for how long? The beasts from the Upper Kingdom were greatly affected by the loss of its colonies: they had nothing to control, nothing to feed them, they would probably die too. Plus, the lava tunnels around them received less and less of the red fluid as the volcano sent it to the five realms. The kingdom was getting colder by the seconds and the inhabitants were already shivering.

All of those beasts’ suffering ended in an instant. The bridge between the kingdom and the volcano was shattered by an unknown force and the kingdom’s island quickly drifted away. The lava left the island in an instant, the creatures all died, completely frozen.

The few living near the volcano and the Moving Lands had not died yet. But the great source of lava was finite and when the last drops of the red liquid left to the broken realms, everything stopped moving, froze and suffered a silent death.

Maskot finally stopped decapitating his slave and went back to his room, smiling.



Chapter word count: 606
Total word count: 9723

Hope you liked it :D
Any comments? Oh and no spoilers in the comments please ;)
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ROFLMAO! :lol: Brilliant! I thought you said it would be boring! :P

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Wow.... I can't even be boring when I want to be <_<
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wow thanks for that, it was a really enjoyable read.

I really like the part with the clowns!
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I don't remember it very well, but... I don't remember anything about clowns :blink:
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I have not read the all story yet.
I just finish the four chapter,but i real enjoy this story.

The ambush in the hole beside the bed with eshin adepts and giants rats is describe very well. Good Ambiant.

I like, just continue. Thx

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Jul 3 2006, 11:39 AM

A french reader.

Désolé, mais jva rester en anglais ;)

*whips* go on, read the other chapters... isn't that how Archaon become the evil guy from that dark land?
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I haven't read much of the rest of this series, but as a stand alone story this was fantastic :D Definitely not boring.

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