Immortal/Pain

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Immortal/Pain; Cryptic Suikoden oneshot
Topic Started: Apr 2 2008, 08:07 AM (64 Views)
Shiro Ookami	Apr 2 2008, 08:07 AM Post #1
Frozen flame Posts: 58 Group: Recruit Member #33 Joined: May 15, 2007	As usual in these things by me no name will be used but if I say Suikoden 1 it should become clear who the main character is, 1 person is up to the reader to decide and 2 other can/be identified too I saw the celebrations when we won. The happy smiles on every bodies faces. That's when I decided to leave. I'm gifted but also cursed. I'd rather be alone then share the curse. I am immortal but nothing will heal the pain. I got tricked once into coming back. You needed my help and I couldn't resist. But coming back and seeing all that I loved I couldn't stay, I killed them and I will kill you. That's why I'm all alone I am immortal but will never know love again. I kept an eye out for all of you. Coming as close as I dared And yet only you saw me ever. You knew and you understood. I watched all of them die Some fast and painless, others slow. I am immortal and have no ties anymore. I came to you once. Just before it was over. It couldn't hurt you anymore.... I couldn't hurt you anymore The perfect moment only to late..... Only seventy years to late I am immortal and I'm glad I lost the last of my friends. Sometimes I see them. But we never talk about old times. We just seek comfort in each others arms. They haven't changed a bit in all these centuries. Sometimes I wonder if they have been cursed too But I never ask. I can see in their eyes the same pain as I feel. We are immortal, together but always and forever Alone.



Kaichama	Sep 28 2008, 04:28 AM Post #2
Wind rune Posts: 92 Group: Recruit Member #110 Joined: September 26, 2008	this make me kinda sad... yes it's clear who is the 'I' here ^^
	Hay there!


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