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Swifty's Drawings; /has WAY too much free time
Topic Started: Mar 6 2007, 09:55 PM (11,411 Views)
Swift
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/win
:P
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Jonny
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Moved to Graphics.
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Banished
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Science is one sweet high
Sexy drawings, Swift. /commits onanism/
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Swift
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I'm sure most of you know who this is (if you don't you deserve to die by paper cuts!!).
I still need to fix it up some, but i'm tired, so I'll do that later. Just wanted to put up what I had so far. My first attempt at him, btw.
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Athuria
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It looks good, you're definitely improving. My only complaints are the hands and leg anatomy, which seem off. And the tunic is acting weird, and not like what I presume was your reference photo. (In your sig.) But it looks like Link! Honestly, when I try it never looks like him. >.>
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Uraia Gelling
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Mar 25 2007, 01:54 PM
It looks good, you're definitely improving. My only complaints are the hands and leg anatomy, which seem off. And the tunic is acting weird, and not like what I presume was your reference photo. (In your sig.) But it looks like Link! Honestly, when I try it never looks like him. >.>

What she said.
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Swift
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Yeah, like I said, I'm still working on it. I did it really late last night, and I just figured, what the heck, and put it up here for no real reason >.>;

It'll look a lot better when I get done with it, trust me, I was only like, halfway done with it. x_X
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Uraia Gelling
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Ah, yes, but we are helping you decide what to change, no?
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Athuria
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Yup, it's always best to get critique while your sketching, so you can fix it before you get done with it.
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Swift
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Eh, yeah, thanks, I guess.
I knew I had to go back and just entirely redraw a few things already, not to sound stuck-up, but yeah, I'll be sure to pay careful attention to the said things. I'm going for the look Rynk V3 had to prove to myself it wasn't just luck O_o;
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There, I "finished" it. :D
How's it look? Anything else I should fix?
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Athuria
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The hand looks strange where it grips the sword. It doesn't look like the thumb is behind to hold it. But other than that, I like it! As I said, I can never seem to get it to look like Link. ._.
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Banished
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What Tessie said. The thumb looks a bit to big and as if it's not hidden behind the sword.
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Omg, just....so...many...Avelyns.

For those of you keeping track, this is the fourth version of her, if you even say that, sorta more like V3 and 1/2 but that's too long to write (as you should know, I'm lazy >.>)
Anyways, I know what you're thinking... "wow, that doesn't look like the other ones for some reason?" I did her face a little differently, I've been trying to experiment with different little things (especially the eyes). Overall though, I think there are a few mistakes I should address, but I think it's a slight improvement over V3, especially the sword.
Btw, yes, the sword does retract (the handle, the base, and the mid-section to make it easier to carry), so, yeah, get it out of your system, "ZOMG SWIFT USED AN IDEA FROM FFVII: ADVENT CHILDREN!!"

But... FFVII wasn't the first thing that ever used a sword that could expand or contract mechanically, was it? So, I figure it's fair game; not like it's actually Cloud's buster sword or something XD
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Btw, yeah, I see what you guys mean about Rynk's hand. Basically, the reason it seems like that is because of a crease at the base of his thumb's section of the glove, and that the scanner didn't seem to pick up the line of the Sword's handle. Easily fixed since I already have it drawn XD just gotta darken it some.

So yeah, I'll fix that and the fingers sometime.
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Awesome, dude. She looks younger in that one and strangely, ehm, seductive...
And the sword looks fierce. O.O
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She looks rather cute and bubbly. XD

Hmm.. Banished, maybe it's that raised eyebrow. Looks a little mischievous too with that grin. *evil laughter from background*

Awesome though! Really digging that sword =P
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Athuria
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COLD!! >.<

*Ahem* Anyway, typical hand deal, where they look strange. Her head may be a bit too big for her age. and one of her arms is way longer than the other. O.o the feet look strange to be, but it may be a personal quirk. And how does her shirt stay on?! o.O

Other than that, it looks good. I think her eyes should maybe be a bit older looking, but you have a pretty good sense of anatomy, and detail.

And you draw weapons much better than me. D:
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It's a magical shirt. =P
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Swift
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Yeah, I'm definatly going to go back and fix her. You should have see these eyes I accidentally came out with before, she just looked... omg, I don't even know how to describe it O_o; it was like, scary... x_X

lolblameitonmagic.

Yeah, I'm gonna fix her shirt too. If you see V3, it was held up by the 'elastic' sides that went around her back, etc. Donno, it's based off of Ashe from FFXII, so blame Square Enix >.>
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