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Topic Started: May 25 2008, 11:35 AM (476 Views)
The Royall J	Mar 7 2009, 09:12 AM Post #61
The Last Cool White Guy Posts: 955 Group: Moderator Member #1 Joined: February 7, 2007 Sex Yes	Sure.
	Do not walk in front of me I may not follow. Do not walk behind me I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.


daioni	Jun 14 2009, 08:51 PM Post #62
Pro Posts: 492 Group: Moderator Member #10 Joined: May 29, 2007	Thorn: -Chapter of the Source: Contains spells the delve into the core of magic, these spells cannot be cast without a source of magic, in Thorn's case, his staff. Where as most spells are derived from limited amounts of magic focused and formed, these spells focus on raw power. They are less focused and less versitile, more chaotic and lingering then other spells. Spells that require little focus but have more output, albeit with much less control. Raphael: -Divine guidance: Raphael recieves some form of unseen guidance, though he himself does not understand it completely, he just knows it tells him where he, or others, "need to be". Edited by daioni, Jul 1 2009, 01:05 PM.
	Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes.


The Royall J	Jun 16 2009, 07:35 AM Post #63
The Last Cool White Guy Posts: 955 Group: Moderator Member #1 Joined: February 7, 2007 Sex Yes	For Thorn those are too nondescript. It doesn't really say what he can do at all with those two chapters. For Raphael just take away the knowledge of what needs to be done and you're good on that one.
	Do not walk in front of me I may not follow. Do not walk behind me I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.


daioni	Jun 16 2009, 04:46 PM Post #64
Pro Posts: 492 Group: Moderator Member #10 Joined: May 29, 2007	updated.
	Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes.


The Royall J	Jun 16 2009, 11:01 PM Post #65
The Last Cool White Guy Posts: 955 Group: Moderator Member #1 Joined: February 7, 2007 Sex Yes	The second one still doesn't say what it does. It's just double talk that doesn't mean anything.
	Do not walk in front of me I may not follow. Do not walk behind me I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.


daioni	Jun 17 2009, 06:33 AM Post #66
Pro Posts: 492 Group: Moderator Member #10 Joined: May 29, 2007	Sorry bout that, edited a little more.
	Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes.


The Royall J	Jun 17 2009, 08:08 AM Post #67
The Last Cool White Guy Posts: 955 Group: Moderator Member #1 Joined: February 7, 2007 Sex Yes	What do you mean by forces of nature? Really both of those chapters sound like things he can already do.
	Do not walk in front of me I may not follow. Do not walk behind me I may not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend.


daioni	Jun 17 2009, 05:50 PM Post #68
Pro Posts: 492 Group: Moderator Member #10 Joined: May 29, 2007	Edited again to try and make the differences more clear.
	Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes.


Batguy	Jun 24 2009, 01:34 PM Post #69
Not too shabby Posts: 306 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: February 10, 2007	So the first chapter is spells that require little focus but have more output, albeit with much less control; is that what you're trying to get across? Because if it is, you could avoid any further confusion by wording it that way. As for the second I just don't understand what you're going for. You need to specify what the 'powers of nature' are. Are we talking spells manipulating the four (or five, depending on your mythos) basic elements, or are we talking shamanistic abilities like channeling animal power and controlling plants/animals?



daioni	Jun 24 2009, 07:54 PM Post #70
Pro Posts: 492 Group: Moderator Member #10 Joined: May 29, 2007	First one you have right, I've edited it thus. The second is not controling or manipulating nature, rather harnessing nature to improve himself, sort of quasi shapeshifting spells that add buffs to a person rather then totally change form
	Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes.


daioni	Jul 1 2009, 01:06 PM Post #71
Pro Posts: 492 Group: Moderator Member #10 Joined: May 29, 2007	Decided to just stick to the one for now, hopefully that makes it a bit easier now.
	Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away and you have their shoes.


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