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| A random pokemon storyline | |
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| Topic Started: Sep 7 2007, 10:31 PM (104 Views) | |
| blood rain | Sep 7 2007, 10:31 PM Post #1 |
Feel my Heat
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I decided to write a random storyline about a pokemon game called Oynx version(I don't think there are any pokemon versions called Oynx.)There will be no sprites or maps because I am rubbish at them lol and I made this just as a bit of fun.Please rate this storyline and comment about it. Introduction When the world began darkness ruled all.The darkness creator,Shotanrey,a pokemon so evil that it made the most evil people turn away in disgust. Capturing pokemon as slaves and forcing them to do the most cruelist of things.But one day a brave pokemon stood his ground against his shadow master.This pokemon fought back against Shotanrey.The battle raged for hours,but eventually Shotanrey defeated his challenger. With a sweep of his hand he put the pokemon in a dark void.Now 2,000 years later the pokemon escapes. Object of the game You begin the game in a little village called Kentron Village.And on your 10th birthday you get to pick a pokemon.There is only one pokemon left.The Proffessor known as,Proffessor Syrup gives you the pokemon and wishes you good luck on your journey. The pokemon you have starts to act strangely.It sends images into your head from a long time ago.All you can see is this huge,evil pokemon.You ignore these images for the time being,but they keep on appearing and soon you have no choice,but to do whatever needs to be done to stop these images appearing. You set off on a long and dangerous adventure.From battling vicious pokemon to sailing out in the sea.You and your pokemon begin to start understanding each other and eventually you understand what your pokemon is telling you.Stop the shadow creator,Shotanrey,at all costs. |
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| Poke Alster | Sep 8 2007, 06:13 PM Post #2 |
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You like making stories, dont you? anyway this ones good as well
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| blood rain | Sep 8 2007, 06:25 PM Post #3 |
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Feel my Heat
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Yer I like making stories.Thanks for your comment.
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| Houndoomed | Sep 8 2007, 06:26 PM Post #4 |
Don't mess with the best.
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^^ Constructive criticism much? First, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE press the space button after dots and commas! My eyes bleed when I see a whole paragraph with none. People won't read your stories if you don't do this. There's already a popular fangame called Onyx, but since it's not real, who cares?  That and you spelt professor wrong. Plus, how does the character know where to go to find this pokemon? Wouldn't it be better if it came and captured the Professor or something other than sending images like text messages? It's quite good, at least it's something new :). |
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| blood rain | Sep 9 2007, 09:46 AM Post #5 |
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Feel my Heat
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It is impossible for me to leave spaces ><. The teacher always tells me to, but I just forget to do it, but next time I will remember to do it. I suppose it would have been better if the pokemon came to capture the professor, but I decided to use the images way to make it a bit different. I would have extended on it, but I just made it for a bit of fun. Thanks for all your comments.
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