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Best Dramatic Scene
Topic Started: Aug 5 2009, 06:17 PM (101 Views)
Abi Noel-Carter
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"An episode that is turbulent or highly emotional " -- Defining Dramatic on Google. Which scenes were you shaking with anger throughout- which were you in tears yourself?



* Please remember you are allowed to nominate your own things, but don't forget your favorites of others!
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Bradley Cox
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Scene: The resolution of Death Cruise.

Dilemma: Choose someone to get shot- sacrifice or Dante.

Sequence of Events: Keeley runs and hugs Mister Mally because he's okay, Andy first offers up her monkeys *blinks* to Daph, before threatening her and Malius, Tyler and Juls gang up on Ryder, and start beating him to a pulp, we and then of course Amaris offers herself up to get shot.

Then Gryphin actually shoots her. Talk about tough love.

Tanya runs to a broken and bleeding Amaris to the floor, trying to save her life. She succeeds, by doing the muggle way, the painful way.

Then Dante pulls out his wand, which would have saved Amaris from a lot of pain. Too bad Dante didn't pull the wand out a couple of minutes before.

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Well I think it's worthy
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Sayuri
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I'mmm going to go ahead and nominate the whole Abi/Tristan/Ryan thing in FM. With her dying, and Tristan almost dying, and then Ryan to the rescue, and the race to save Abi? I'm pretty sure I was both in tears and on the edge of my seat, sooo... XD


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Tanya Swann
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(( DUDE. I so second both of above nominationnnss <3))

Scene: (( http://s6.zetaboards.com/Pheonix_Penna/topic/425559/5/ )) The Study/Library of Old Grimassari Manor after Emma was kidnapped by Ramon.

Conflict: In an attempt to break down Emma for information against friends/relations Andy & Ryou, Ramon/Tiger "kill" Kevin...

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Her eyes still glued hauntingly on her husband, lying still and bound on the floor, yet Emma still listened to Ramon's words as he spoke to Tiger, loud enough for her to hear. As she listened to, her blood ran cold at the thought of more pain and even worse a truth potion. They'd know if she was lying, or avoiding one of their questions with that surely.

They'd warned her; they'd told her if she didn't talk or caused a fuss there would be consequences and her family would be hurt. Why hadn't she believed them? This was her fault, surely. Kevin was captured and injured because of her. A part of her just wanted to give in and divulge the information they wanted to get out of her. Then it would all be over. They could go home, get Katie back and no one need know, as Ramon had said... Only... she would know. She would know that she had given up her friends lives in one wave of weakness. Another wave of nausea swept over her and leaning as best she could over the arm of the chair, Emma emptied the contents of her stomach over the side.

She barely noticed Ramon leaving and only vaguely took note that Tigs and the guard were still in the room. "Just let Kevin go" Emma pleaded with Tigs, in one final attempt slumping back in her seat, still shaking. "Please..."


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Tigs figured Emma had enough, and quite bluntly the stumps bleeding into her jeans were making her rather nauseous. Disgusting. Absolutely disgusting. It took a lot of self-control to keep her face steady, despite her wanting to jump up and get out.

"Good enough for me. Thanks for all your help, hun." Tigs stood up, her back to Emma as she pointed her wand at the "Kevin". A whispered word, and a deep gash appeared on his neck, the deep scarlet of his life spurting out slightly in the impact, and then steadying into a stream. It was too late though, as she'd spelled him so deep it snapped his neck. It hung there, loosely, and Tigs looked down at her outfit in distaste.


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"No! Kevin!" she just kept screaming the words over and over, until her voice ran hoarse and then still screamed some more, her cheeks wet with tears. And Tiger just seemed... calm... like this was an everyday occurrence, slitting a man's throat and letting him bleed to death.

"No! Please! He'll die..." Emma was hysterical, trying desperately to get to Kevin but to no avail. "Please..." But her words fell on deaf ears, as Tiger left the pair of them alone and Emma watched as the blood flowed and flowed, before finally she knew it was all over.

Kevin was gone. And by now, Emma had fallen silent, staring blankly at what had been her husband, feeling herself, like an empty shell.


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Kylie Swann
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... Juice seems to kind of have been meant for these scenes, in retrospect.

Scene: I titled this one, "Jace + Gun = Hawt (Julie would've thought so too if she hadn't been bleeding out.) "

Juice infiltrated the mansion of Andre's to steal Arram back and then...Julie was sectumsempra'd and...

Excerpt: "I think I'm pregnant," she managed to get out, looking down at her soaked sweatshirt and Jace's now-ruined jacket.

Pregnant? Most certainly not anymore.

Edited by Kylie Swann, Aug 23 2009, 11:10 PM.
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the smile on your face let's me know that you need me
there's a truth in your eyes saying you'll never leave me
the touch of your hand says you'll catch me if ever I fall...
you say it best, when you say nothing at all...
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I dont know if I can considering I had a character somewhat involved...but I seccond Tanya
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Kylie Swann
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Whenever youtube, decides it'd like to cooperate;

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ziui1LLT2l0

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the smile on your face let's me know that you need me
there's a truth in your eyes saying you'll never leave me
the touch of your hand says you'll catch me if ever I fall...
you say it best, when you say nothing at all...
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