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| Topic Started: Dec 15 2008, 08:53 PM (38 Views) | |
| rosalieart | Dec 15 2008, 08:53 PM Post #1 |
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| Leviathan | Dec 16 2008, 02:03 AM Post #2 |
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Try rhyming with multiple syllables. For instance, glorious- story is, horny kids, thorny kiss, mourning this, and hording bids all come to mind off the top of my head. Also avoid rhymes like "be" and "see". Also, stick to a rhyme scheme. I always like AB, AB and keep the same amount of syllables. so if you use what I just told you, the first part could look like this: "It is truly glorious My life seems so free Avoiding death's thorny kiss Things are better that I know me" 7 syllables (hard to work with, but I wanted that first line in there) AB, AB, and yeah. That's one bar. |
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