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| Topic Started: Dec 7 2008, 09:09 PM (88 Views) | |
| Ripred | Dec 7 2008, 09:09 PM Post #1 |
You were meant to rule the dark, I was meant to see the sun
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Posted Image lol I actually finished something. |
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| 3d | Dec 7 2008, 09:36 PM Post #2 |
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Chicken Xing
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Is the helmet/bone/head thing symmetrical? Or is the (our) left horn in the center of the head? If it's symmetrical, I'm pretty sure the horn wouldn't have that much curve. From our perspective it would come up more directly with a more subtle curve. The green fire (I'm guessing) doesn't look like fire. It looks too much like a solid part of the body. I'd maybe consider removing the flames or both the flames and the two heads, but that's just me. I'll maybe type more later? |
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| Kameshugener | Dec 7 2008, 09:41 PM Post #3 |
Shop and Drop: Your #1 source of suicide since 2008.
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It looks pretty good, as far as I can tell. I think the arms look a little thin and floppy, tbh, but I think it was meant to be that way. My problems aren't with the sprite itself, but more with the skulls and flames. The skulls only look like each other in a loose sense, and one of them seem to have a snubby snout while the other is longer. (Admittedly, this could be perspective, but you could better prove that by showing the skull further away.) Also, the fire looks very two dimensional and oddly shaded. Fire tends to be light on the inside and dark, and usually doesn't have an outline. I don't know if the green stuff is fire or gas or whatever, but it probably shouldn't have an outline anyway. Either way this is a pretty good sprite. I'm not great at crit, but oh well. |
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| Ripred | Dec 7 2008, 09:51 PM Post #4 |
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You were meant to rule the dark, I was meant to see the sun
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It's not supposed to be fire, it's more of a stylized willowisp type thing. I used Spritomb as a reference. |
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| Shed | Dec 13 2008, 09:58 PM Post #5 |
Don't go in the Shed!
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In terms of the design, I'm not very fond of the floating skulls and green aura thing. In terms of the sprite itself, remove the dark outline to the aura (or make it light). Also, the two skulls that serve as (I think) shoulder pads need to look more like shoulder pads. Make them flatter, position them closer to the front, and/or make it seem like it is only the top of the skull. |
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