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Gliscomoth
Topic Started: Nov 26 2008, 05:47 PM (513 Views)
Penguin
Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
I didn't know where to put this, since the review board seems to have disappeared. o_o

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Edited by Penguin, Dec 6 2008, 02:36 PM.
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Ripred
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It's too late for PMF.
Still needs more obvious outline shading (I know you don't want to use black, just use a dark shade of the color and more contrast.
Tis <3 though.
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RUN HE IS BESIDE YOU
It's a great sprite, but some of the light sources are a little off. Read: the left arm.
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Penguin
Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
Which left? Ours or his/hers?
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His/hers
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187666
Boredom Strikes Again.
I don't see anything wrong with It's left hand O.o I was thinking on It's right hand have lighter shade on the other part of the claw aswell.
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I said arm/shoulder, right? I hope so...
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187666
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oic. Yeah, that does look off. Change the highlight on It's left shoulder to shadow, and it will look far more consistent.
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Penguin
Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
I'll finish it later; for now, here's Chinx. :D
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I have a couple comments about Chinx.

The way you shaded it makes it look like it has shiny skin. And both cats and monkeys don't have shiny skin. So remove the highlight and add more contrast.

More contrast on the fur. You can barely see the shadow and the highlight doesn't stick out enough. The texture needs to be more furry. Usually when I sprite fur I make the pixel texture jagged, but that's only what I do so, meh. Anyways make it look like it has fur, to me it seems like its a different colored skin. So... ya. O.o

Lighter outlines. Just around the first shade. It would look so much better that way.

Fin.
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Penguin
Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
I edited them both, but I personally like the old Chinx. ._. Maybe I just didn't do the fur shading right...

Also added Wingulpin, request from Speed-X. :)
Edited by Penguin, Dec 6 2008, 02:37 PM.
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hm... just a couple things i noticed in particular. gliscomoth's right claw looks like it only has half of it. perhaps make he other side a bit clearer/bigger?
and chinx's orang, IMO, doesn't have quite enough contrast between the shades and it seems sort of flat because of that. i really like wingulpin though. :D
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