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| Topic Started: May 19 2008, 10:01 PM (80 Views) | |
| Sandstone-Shadow | May 19 2008, 10:01 PM Post #1 |
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Posted Image Telekeet is the first stage of a Psychic/Flying fake line. It was so much cuter when I drew it... >_> I know you guys have suggestions. =D Hand 'em over. Now. Please? =D |
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| Involuntary Twitch | May 20 2008, 04:57 PM Post #2 |
Tell me the truth this time, why don't you.
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Hm... there are three main problems I can see with this sprite... they are: 1. The beak looks too small and sort of twisted to the side. Also, making it the same color as the face looks awkward. Why not make it green like the markings, or orange like the feet? 2. Try defining the feathers on the wings. Presently they look blocky and kind of immobile. 3. What's the thing on its head? o_O All told, though, you've gotten so much better. :D Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing the evolutions! |
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| Sandstone-Shadow | May 20 2008, 06:20 PM Post #3 |
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Posted Image 1) Hmm, okay. I recolored the beak and attempted to untwist it. Does it look okay now? I don't really want to make it bigger unless I have to. 2) Oops. I meant to do that, but I guess I was excited to call the sprite done. XD How are the wings now? 3) Ah. It's supposed to be a feather. *edits* Thanks, Zephyr! Fwee, hopefully I get the evolutions done soon... they're called Psykatiel and Divinecaw. |
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