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| Topic Started: May 17 2008, 07:41 PM (58 Views) | |
| EternalEbony | May 17 2008, 07:41 PM Post #1 |
I See Dead Laptops...
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Posted Image My first sprite in ages, and I can't figure out what's wrong with it. I'd really, really like some crit on this- Please? |
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| rosalieart | May 17 2008, 07:58 PM Post #2 |
Resident Band Geek.
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the mandibles, i think stick out too far, and you need another leg.
;) maybe bend/shorten the legs as well. the rest i pm'ed you already. XP edit- i figured out what was funky with the mandibles. curve them in some more, they're placed widely and are only curved near the tip. |
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| EternalEbony | May 17 2008, 08:31 PM Post #3 |
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I See Dead Laptops...
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They're Spinarak's mandibles, I assume that's how they're supposed to look. Actually, I'm thinking of removing them- I was just worried it wouldn't look enough like Spinarak without them, that's all, more like a quadraped Staryu. |
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