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| Topic Started: Apr 10 2008, 08:38 PM (67 Views) | |
| Penguin | Apr 10 2008, 08:38 PM Post #1 |
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Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
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First, read Not What I'd Call "Smashing". Then post comments. Just so you know, it is a story about the five rejected Brawl characters: Pichu, Dr. Mario, Roy, Mewtwo, and Young Link. Also, if anyone can tell me something about Roy in context to Fire Emblem, I'd appreciate it. |
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| 3d | Apr 10 2008, 08:40 PM Post #2 |
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Chicken Xing
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Remember, PG. There needs to be a paragraph for each thing/person that's speaking. No Roy info, sorriez. D: |
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| Penguin | Apr 10 2008, 08:42 PM Post #3 |
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Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
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I don't know what you mean. >D> Is it any good? The only fics I've ever written before were random, spammy, scripted fics. |
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| 3d | Apr 10 2008, 08:46 PM Post #4 |
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Chicken Xing
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I'm sorry, there must've been something stuck in my eye. D:! I think its good. But as there are only three paragraphs, its not much to judge off of. A.K.A. WRITE MOAR! >:U EDIT: Actually now that I've read it more thoroughly. I realized something. If you're going to have a character do something you might want to elaborate on it. You usually just don't tell the readers he practiced electric attacks on a tree and leave it at that. Usually you give detail on what your character does. I guess it ultimately depends on your writing style though. |
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| Penguin | Apr 10 2008, 09:13 PM Post #5 |
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Well, he's a platypus. They don't do much.
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Added detail to Chapter 1 and wrote Chapter 2. I knew I was bad at writing. ;O; |
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| Kameshugener | Apr 18 2008, 06:36 PM Post #6 |
Shop and Drop: Your #1 source of suicide since 2008.
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Ooh, have Roy talking to Marth/Ike. It won't be that hard to find Ike's background. |
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