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| Seth | Aug 15 2005, 04:17 AM Post #1 |
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Comment here please. |
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| Fure | Aug 15 2005, 11:26 AM Post #2 |
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I liked it, but I see that yuo used their names alot. Use things like "The Bird" or "The boy" etc etc to get rid of thre repetitiveness. But good job. |
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| Seth | Aug 15 2005, 01:17 PM Post #3 |
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It's a Gryphon not a bird. ;) But yeah I'll work on that. |
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| Fure | Aug 15 2005, 02:35 PM Post #4 |
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or Creature, or half bird or something :P Lol |
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