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"destine' Comments
Topic Started: Jul 16 2005, 12:13 AM (429 Views)
Fure
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Yeah... Comments... and title.

In this will be some familiar characters, some new to me some not...
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Fure
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Come on :___: I need some comments... I comment on YOURs when I read them dont I?
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Nice begginning, well written. Good job. But is it in the rules? I mean, does it have anything to do with Mutations or Pokémon?
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its in Legends and OTHERS <- Underlined for emphasis.

This is an, in fact, other.
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Fure
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longer part up!

Please Read...

And Comment...

PWEASE
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Ladiadiadius
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I like it ^_^ its really fun
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I'll continue as soon as another person comments...
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Hm, you certainly are good with midieval-style stories and RPGs. I got a bit confused as to what happened to the mercenary, but that got cleared up a bit. The only question in my head right now is "why the hell do they forget about what they did?" I hope the answer comes sometime soon...

Anyways, good story, I like it and I am curious about the two bodies "visible in the hall"... *wonders*
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heh, in this part I'm fixing up, you'll meet the bodies.

One's based off my freind, another Foxling

and a human :o :o My second ever rp chara after Frecyo was created.
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Is it... Kage Sumi, the one in your email? :o
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Yesh :o

Kage Sumi = Dark Mirror
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It's confusing me... first they're talking about some mark, then they're running around and there are two foxgirls and the dude loses his memory and...
*head a splode*
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okay, lemme do some splainin

The guy who talks about the destines, he is a researcher whois just there, he will play an important role later.

The fire, it scarred Fre, and he gets amnesia cuz his destiny got rebooted.

Get it?
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umm... no. the whole thing is confusing...
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X___X
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Fure
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New part up.

Not what you thought, huh?
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Frecyo and Siar became kids again overnight or what? Kage is right, they don't look like what the stories say. :P
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The love their meat buns. But soon, there personalities will, like, flip O_O
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Emo Charleh
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Trying to evolve and keep up with the rest.
It's confusing, to say the least. It's okay I guess...
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well, later on it gets less confusing, then more confusing when Valerie comes.
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