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| Clan of the Wolves Comment Area; Comments plz | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 8 2005, 09:59 PM (280 Views) | |
| Ripred | May 8 2005, 09:59 PM Post #1 |
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It's too late for PMF.
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I would like comments please, and once I get the first chapter up probably characters too. Woohoo. |
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| Zargata | May 8 2005, 10:44 PM Post #2 |
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wha...?
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It's a good start, although a bit too broad. There's alot of very interesting pathways to go off on, but staying on the same one might be a bit difficult. Just a suggestion. |
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| Shed | May 9 2005, 10:15 PM Post #3 |
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Don't go in the Shed!
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I like having many pathys of thought availible. It makes the story more flexible for future twists. Masquerain, good beggining. I think this story will be a very interesting one. can't wait to read more. Character ideas... You can do what others have done in their stories. Use other people's characters in your story. I find it interesting to find the same character in such different contexts. For example I'd never expect to find Diana (Fate) in the Mutae Islands (Fushigi). |
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