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Topic Started: May 3 2005, 12:43 AM (1,307 Views)
onjay
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team havoc
team destroyer
team destruction
and any other names with team (place word describing horrible person)
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Zargata
wha...?
By the way it doesn't have to have 'team' in front of it.
It could be like Dark Riders are something cooler
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Shed
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Don't go in the Shed!
Great job with Fate :)

How about The Flames of Ice? Sounds cool, contradictory, and i came up with a cool rhyme :P:

We burn, we freeze,
We're swift like the breeze,
We're cunning like mice,
We are The Flames of Ice!

:)
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Vierdz
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Zargata
May 6 2005, 12:36 AM
I know, it what I'm best at....misspelling If you want or anyone want to edit it for me so it can be more readable, please do.

I'll edit it for you! I'll send the edited version over e-mail and then you can replace the old story with it... somehow. It'll be ready by this monday!
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Zargata
wha...?
Vierdz
May 6 2005, 08:30 PM
I'll edit it for you! I'll send the edited version over e-mail and then you can replace the old story with it... somehow. It'll be ready by this monday!

Thank you Vierdz *heart heart heart* LOL jk

Shed: Hmm... I like 'We're swift like the breeze' LOL
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Zargata
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Part 3 done and ready to be edited :lol:
on to part 4
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Fure
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*wonders what Zargat is doing with his name written down* *slightly* *nervous*

I hope Part 4 comes out soon
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Zargata
wha...?
Just a fact:

Posted Imagesee her hair? I made mine look like it today!
Mines lot longer though, yeepy for red blonde hair!
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Vierdz
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Zargata
May 8 2005, 01:51 AM
Just a fact:

Posted Imagesee her hair? I made mine look like it today!
Mines lot longer though, yeepy for red blonde hair!

Really? You did? I can't wait to see it on Monday! *ahem* anyway, I'll get to reading your new part o' the story...
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Vierdz
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Zargata
May 7 2005, 01:25 AM
By the way it doesn't have to have 'team' in front of it.
It could be like Dark Riders are something cooler

Team DOOM. ... i dunno. That's what it'd be called if I was in a bad-guy team. Or just... Doom. ... never mind.
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onjay
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Vierdz
May 8 2005, 02:15 AM
Zargata
May 7 2005, 01:25 AM
By the way it doesn't have to have 'team' in front of it.
It could be like Dark Riders are something cooler

Team DOOM. ... i dunno. That's what it'd be called if I was in a bad-guy team. Or just... Doom. ... never mind.

team DOOM? let me guess, they summon creatures from the underworld to do their bidding?(doom 3 reference)

how about...... resurrected evil?
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Zargata
wha...?
Vierdz
May 7 2005, 06:15 PM
Zargata
May 7 2005, 01:25 AM
By the way it doesn't have to have 'team' in front of it.
It could be like Dark Riders are something cooler

Team DOOM. ... i dunno. That's what it'd be called if I was in a bad-guy team. Or just... Doom. ... never mind.

Thank you for trying ^_^

Onjay: Interresting
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Zargata
wha...?
sorry for posting Again
but Part 4 is done! Part 5 will be here soon!
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Vierdz
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Zargata
May 8 2005, 10:49 PM
sorry for posting Again
but Part 4 is done! Part 5 will be here soon!

YAY. Do you still want me to edit it for you? I remember you saying at school you've already edited it... but I still see errors. Posted Image
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Zargata
wha...?
Vierdz
May 8 2005, 03:01 PM
Zargata
May 8 2005, 10:49 PM
sorry for posting Again
but Part 4 is done! Part 5 will be here soon!

YAY. Do you still want me to edit it for you? I remember you saying at school you've already edited it... but I still see errors. Posted Image

Thats a Diana edit, I just make the word program not tell me I'm not wrong. And word...well lets say it just wants everything spelled right even though I used the wrong word.
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Vierdz
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Zargata
May 8 2005, 11:06 PM
Vierdz
May 8 2005, 03:01 PM
Zargata
May 8 2005, 10:49 PM
sorry for posting Again
but Part 4 is done! Part 5 will be here soon!

YAY. Do you still want me to edit it for you? I remember you saying at school you've already edited it... but I still see errors. Posted Image

Thats a Diana edit, I just make the word program not tell me I'm not wrong. And word...well lets say it just wants everything spelled right even though I used the wrong word.

yeah, word doesn't recognize words that don't belong in that sentence or are used wrong (such as using 'are' for 'our')
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Zargata
wha...?
[size=7]BLAH BLAH BLAH![/size]

:blink:
K i'm going to work again
all done.
now to my next story
'Hope in Fate'
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onjay
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let me guess.....the sequal to fate? also, the ending seemed kinda sudden.
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Zargata
wha...?
;) I know
That has a reason like everything I do
Hope in Fate will clear that up for you.
remenber I give away everything, read bettew the words
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Shed
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Wow... A startling end! As onjay said, kind of sudden. But if we get a sequel, then it's great!
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