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    The Legend of Zelda: The Beginning; Please Read! I worked very hard!
    Topic Started: Apr 15 2005, 02:56 PM (400 Views)
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    The Legend of Zelda: The Chaos Blade & The Great War
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    CHAPTER ONE- The Story Begins



    Once upon a time, before the hero of time ever came into existence, before the master sword was created, the world was very peaceful. However, trouble was stirring. An evil warrior named Gibbi was rumored to be searching for the legendary chaos blade. This blade was rumored to have unmeasurable powers. This sword was supposed to be even more powerful than the triforce, and if someone got their hands on this sword, they'd be transformed into a dark being with enourmous power. The power of chaos. For those of you who don't know, chaos can be a number of things, but it is mainly a combination of light and dark. These powers could warp the universe, grant wishes, and take over the planet. A swordsman-in-training heard about this and thought nothing of it. He figured his dad would take care of it, since he was the leader of the Swordsman Elite.

    Meanwhile the warrior Gibbi was planning on how he would find the sword. Now Gibbi alread had a magic sword, one of the most powerful in the world. It was the shadow blade. However, from what he understood, he needed the light blade to be able to get into the final temple which contained the chaos blade. But he needn't worry about that now, he needed to focus on the temples holding the prism shards also needed to get into the temple.....


    ~I have written the whole thing all ready, and there's a total of 12 chapters. I am splitting it up because I want to give everyone a chance to read each chapter alone. This is also a very short chapter compared to a lot of them...~
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    The Chaos Blade is more powerful than the Master Sword! :o

    Good fic BTW. :)
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    MattB22890
    Apr 15 2005, 03:16 PM
    The Chaos Blade is more powerful than the Master Sword! :o

    Good fic BTW. :)

    Yes, it is much more powerful ^_^

    Thanks!
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    Wow great fan fic! Good job!
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    Bambam!
    Apr 15 2005, 03:44 PM
    Wow great fan fic! Good job!

    Why thank you ^_^
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    Chelsea FC Champions 55-05-06-10

    Cool, I actually prefer to read longer ones :P . Good fan-fic but I have to say one thing........THE TRIFORCE RULES!

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    Sontailsic
    Apr 15 2005, 03:48 PM
    Cool, I actually prefer to read longer ones :P . Good fan-fic but I have to say one thing........THE TRIFORCE RULES!

    Lol, don't worry, I'll post the next chapter soon.
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    good good i cant wait to read it well done witht this 1
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    Good Job! Next Chapter
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    CHAPTER 2- A Deadly Plan



    Link was practicing his sword techniques out in an open field with his dad, when suddenly his dad stopped. He told Link that he would be going off to find the chaos blade and stop Gibbi from taking over the world. He told Link that he may never be back, and if he died, he would have to take his place. I have learned of what I need to do to obtain the chaos blade. Link's father walked out of the field, but Link kept practicing.


    Gibbi's right hand guy, Enthis, entered the room and informed Gibbi that the leader of the Swordsman Elite, Yarman, was also searching for the chaos blade to stop him. Gibbi was outraged and decided to send out Enthis to destroy him. Enthis then informed Gibbi that Yarman had the Light Blade. Then Gibbi told Enthis to take the shadow blade with him and take the light blade. And so Enthis headed out to find Gibbi and take the light sword.
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    Good, but got a bit repetitive in the last bit with names.

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    Sontailsic
    Apr 15 2005, 05:00 PM
    Good, but got a bit repetitive in the last bit with names.

    Ya, lol, but I try to keep it clear for readers who get confused :P
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    When is the next installment in this thrilling series coming :P

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    CHAPTER 3- A Most Painful Loss



    Yarman was traveling through Kokiri forest with his companion Trafe, when he heard an evil laugh. It was Enthis. Yarman told Trafe to hide and take the sword while he went up ahead. There he saw Enthis. Just standing there smiling. He asked where the light blade was, and Yarman answered with an arrow to the chest. Stunned, Enthis looked at the arrow, then at Yarman. Then he smiled, and said,"You'll have to do better than that." He then pulled the arrow out of his chest and threw it at Yarman. The arrow had such amazing speed and power that it pierced Yarman's armor. "NO!!!" said Trafe. He jumped out of the bushes and started cursing Enthis. "What have we here?" said Enthis. Yarman then charged Enthis and punched him right in the stomach. "That almost hurt" laughed Enthis. Then Yarman told Trafe to go back to the castle and inform Link about everything. And so Trafe started running back to the village, then as he looked back, he saw something horrible. Enthis was torturing Yarman by shooting him with energy balls. There was no going back, he had to go and inform Link and start the training...

    Back at the castle, Link was outside playing with his dog. Trafe burst in the grounds and saw Link. "Come in side my boy, I have some bad news..." So they went inside. "What is it?" "I'm afraid it's your father" said Trafe. "He has been killed by a sorcerer named Enthis, I'm guessing he is one of Gibbi's minions." And so, Trafe told Link everything. He told him about the chaos blade, what he needed to do to get it, and that he needed to train. "If you'd excuse me, I need some time alone" said Link. And so Link went up to his room to take in everything he just learned.



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    Nice, can't wait till Link kicks some *** :P

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