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    Advanced Wars Book 1:; The Falling of Nations
    Topic Started: Apr 14 2005, 11:16 AM (203 Views)
    Mitch
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    "Before"



    "So wanna come to my house, oh say friday?" said Tyler.

    "Sure friday is good." Replied Jake.

    "What the *censored* is that?" Tyler wispered.

    I told you to stop the cussing." Jake exclaimed.

    "Shut it *censored* bag." Declared Tyler, "You make sex jokes. I find that worse than cussing."

    "Wait I here it too." Jake said softly.

    "See?"

    "What the *censored* is that?"

    "It sounds like a bushes resuling," encuiered Tyler. "I'm sure it isn't any thing."

    A kid emeges from bushes, and he is caring a base ball bat.

    "*censored*!" cursed Tyler.

    "You stole my girl!" Yelled the kid.

    "No I was jus-" Jake tried to explain.

    The kid started to whack Jake with the bat.

    "Hey stop it!" yelled Tyler.

    The kid's bat fell in the in Tyler's chest hard, knocking him uncontious.

    Jake was killed that day.

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    Just to let you know these are 6th graders.

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    I know it is really short, but the rest will be longer. I know that it is also pretty badly written, but the next will be better.
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    Canttouchthis04


    Mitch
    Apr 14 2005, 11:16 AM
    "Before"



    "So wanna come to my house, oh say friday?" said Tyler.

    "Sure friday is good." Replied Jake.

    "What the *censored* is that?" Tyler wispered.

    I told you to stop the cussing." Jake exclaimed.

    "Shut it *censored* bag." Declared Tyler, "You make sex jokes. I find that worse than cussing."

    "Wait I here it too." Jake said softly.

    "See?"

    "What the *censored* is that?"

    "It sounds like a bushes resuling," encuiered Tyler. "I'm sure it isn't any thing."

    A kid emeges from bushes, and he is caring a base ball bat.

    "*censored*!" cursed Tyler.

    "You stole my girl!" Yelled the kid.

    "No I was jus-" Jake tried to explain.

    The kid started to whack Jake with the bat.

    "Hey stop it!" yelled Tyler.

    The kid's bat fell in the in Tyler's chest hard, knocking him uncontious.

    Jake was killed that day.

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    Just to let you know these are 6th graders.

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    I know it is really short, but the rest will be longer. I know that it is also pretty badly written, but the next will be better.

    Nice! There was a lot of censoring though....
    "I arrested a man-lady once... who was legally named Phuck."
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    Mitch
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    I know, I don't like writing like that, but it is more reaistic, and believable.
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    Mitch
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    War



    14 years later

    The Calban Nations were starting to split up up, and get into many gang fights. Al of it's 47 Providences started calling themselves nations or countries. War has been predicted.

    Armies are being make, and the soilders are dreding thier probible death in the bloody battle fields.

    "General, we have an incomming message from unit 457." said a comunication chief.

    "Is that a watch tower?" inquired the general.

    "No, inteigance squad," he ansered.

    "Accept it." the general comanded.

    The comunication chief accepted the message, and played it.

    'There are a :bleep: load of of troops comming our way please help u- *bang!*'

    " :bleep: "said the general.

    "What do we do?" asked the comunication chief.

    "Fight"
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    Canttouchthis04


    Keep going!!!! MORE MORE MORE
    "I arrested a man-lady once... who was legally named Phuck."
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    Mitch
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    You like it?
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    Mitch
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    Should I keep going? No one is saying anything.
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    Drizzt
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    That guy.
    how did any of that relate to Advanced Wars?
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    Mitch
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    Did you read the second chapter?
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