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    Metroid Rebel; Metroid Fanfic, live with it.
    Topic Started: Apr 12 2005, 06:34 PM (229 Views)
    PKMNPROF
    ChuChu
    Chapter 00- Prologue

    Metroid Prime was closing in; I had to get to a Phazon patch. I rolled into the Morph Ball to get away. Luckily it worked, Metroid Prime made another Phazon patch, now I just had to get to it. A simple Metroid charged after me just as I got out of the Morph Ball, I quickly hit it with a few missiles, destroying it. Metroid Prime was distracted; I took this chance to get to the patch of Phazon. Once I got their, Prime turned and started to come closer. It fired an energy shot just as I started to charge, oddly enough, my charge beam absorbed the blast, and my screen flashed something that said YOU HAVE ACQUIRED THE OMEGA BEAM. I finished charging the Phazon beam, and found it was the missile combo with the Phazon beam, I fired a missile at the beast, but what came out, was a huge beam, larger then Prime itself. It had hit Prime with full force. When it vanished, Prime was stuck to the wall; the beam’s power must have forced it into the wall. It suddenly fell to the ground, most certainly dead.

    I left the Impact Crater and returned to my ship, where Adam, and friend who sacrificed himself, to save me, was waiting. I recently found him; he had become a computer program and he helped me destroy the X parasite, and the Biological Space Lab in the process. “Hello lady, did you find the creature you chased to that planet in the first place?” Adam replied, once I entered the ship. “Yeah, and more, like Metroid Prime!” I yelled. “Prime? You fought Omega Metroid on the Biological Research Station right? It must have escaped when the Restricted Laboratory was ejected, remember?” Adam said, surprised. “How could I forget?” I replied. The Restricted Laboratory held Metroids, which the scientists were experimenting on; Adam told me there were Beta, Gamma, Alpha, and more. I fought the Omega on my way out of the station, and Prime a few minutes ago. I was wondering, what other Metroids survived the Laboratory explosion, and where they were…
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    Very interesting! *waits for chap. 1*
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    PKMNPROF
    ChuChu
    Chapter 01- Rebel

    Adam started to recharge my energy, and re-supply my missiles, as I was thinking. There were probably more Metroids out there, like Omega and Prime. “Missiles re-supplied and energy fully restored lady. I also found increased Space Pirate activity in Tallon Overworld, very close by; I think you should check it out. Any objections lady?” He told me after a few minutes. I shook my head and left. There was a Space Pirate near the shore. I fired a shot at it and missed. It looked at me and did nothing. I jumped off the ship and slowly walked toward it, with my missiles armed, it still did nothing. When I was in range to punch it, it spoke, “Samus Aran? I was wondering when I would find you.” I stood there, shocked. It seemed friendly, and there were no signs of another Space Pirate nearby. “I was hoping you would join us,” I spoke.

    I was wondering why it asked that; any Space Pirate knows that I am an enemy of the Space Pirates. “What are you talking about?” I said, it was just looking, I felt I could trust it; any normal Space Pirate would of fired at me by now. “You seem confused. Oh, now I see. You don’t know who I am, I am Quaz, the leader of the Rebel Pirates,” It spoke up. Rebel Space Pirates? It seemed it thought I knew about this. “If you want to know more come with me,” It said. Before I answered, it jumped into the water. I could run back to the ship, or follow it. If I follow it, I could walk into a trap, or learn more. If I turn and went to the ship, I would be safe, but I might not learn all I need to. I didn’t know what to do.
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    Good Job! AND U SAID 'LADY' like Adam really does! Great job!
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    NICE! Well done, thats great how many chapters are there?

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    Nicely done, PKMPROF! :D *anxiously awaits more chapters* :P
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    Chelsea FC Champions 55-05-06-10

    I think PKMNPROF has gone.... NOOOOO!

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    PKMNPROF
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    *comes in wet with ripped up cloths and being followed by crocodiles, closes the door behind him and in front of the crocs, locks it* whew, sorry about the wait. I was the only survivor when a plane crashed in the swamp.


    Chapter 02- A Secret Organization

    I jumped in the water following the Pirate. He was standing near an underwater boulder. “I knew you would come, Samus,” it said when it saw me. I said nothing, only watched. The Pirate walked over to a small rock on the ground, and kicked it. The rock opened, reveling a keypad. “Samus, the code this week is 2-9-7-5,” It told me while it was putting it in. I was wondering; if it were a trap, it wouldn’t have given me the code.

    The large boulder opened to reveal a door. It went through it and motioned me to follow. After a while of walking, we reached another door, there was an object on the wall that I scanned and found it was compatible with my weapon. “Just as a precaution, in case you accidentally shoot your weapon, you need to enter your weapon into this device,” he said as he put his weapon in the object. I inserted my weapon into the device. I immediately noticed my weapons were disabled. The Pirate opened a door. Through the door was a small room with a button on the wall and another door. When we both were in the room, it pressed the button causing the water to flow out.

    We went through the door, which lead to a laboratory, there were many Pirates, working on odd things in capsules. I scanned everything I could. I found that the capsules were made from an extremely strong, nearly unbreakable substance. The Pirates were a rebellious group who were trying to defeat the Space Pirates. The most important thing I learned were the creatures inside the capsules. It was a Metroid, a mutated Metroid. It was like a regular Metroid, but the pincers were larger, and seemed to be black. When the Space Pirate who brought me here saw me looking at it, he only said, “Yes Samus, this is the Zeta Metroid, our most important project.”
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    And because of the long wait, i'll post another chapter.

    Chapter 03- The First Mission Part one

    “I see you are interested in that Metroid, well it was-,” the Pirate who led me here was saying, but he was cut off. Another Pirate approached him and whispered something in its ear. It nodded, and turned to me, “Samus, we have a situation. Let me introduce some of the crew, then we must be off.” I said nodded, and it continued, “I am Quaz, leader of the Rebel Pirates, that is our lead scientist Zion, near the Zeta Metroid. And our General of the attack force is Sergeant Saloon, training the newer Pirates over there” Quaz explained to me. I nodded, Quaz suddenly yelled to the rest of the Pirates, “Attention everyone! I need Sergeant Saloon and an attack force of 10 to come with me and Samus on a mission!” Saloon and his men quickly came. “You called Sir?” one of his men asked immediately. Quaz just looked at him and went to a door in the back of the room, Saloon, the attack force, and I followed him.

    We went through the door that led to a ladder, which we climbed up one by one. I ended in a room that was very hot. There was another device on the wall. We all entered our weapons in it, and regained control of them. “Samus, this device also gave you an upgrade to your Varia Suit, it can now-,” Quaz told me, but he was again interrupted. This time by a small earth quake. “What’s going on?” I was the said during the quake. “The Pirates are using powerful digging tools to find more Phazon. There main base of operations is the Monitor Station” Quaz explained. The quake soon stopped, and we continued on. I had a strange feeling as we were walking to the Monitor Station.
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