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    The Legend of Zelda: A Hero's Fate; Fan-Fiction
    Topic Started: Mar 25 2005, 01:25 AM (269 Views)
    Duke of Fenmark
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    Link stirred restlessly in his bed. He was having a strange dream... There was a beautiful princess, and she was in trouble. Grave danger, in fact. She was saying something... Her sweet voice floated through his thoughts like music... "Help me! I am in the castle dungeon... my name is Zelda! Quickly, before the castle guards come for me!"

    He woke suddenly as a bolt of lightning crashed in the pouring rain outside the small cottage. He sat up in bed, and saw his uncle heading out the door. He was holding his small shield in one hand, and his sword was buckled to his belt. "Stay here until i return, Link. I won't be long..." and he went out into the downpour, leaving Link alone and confused. Why was he carrying his weapons out into the rain in the middle of the night?

    Link had to find out what was going on. He dressed and paused to grab the lantern before heading out into the storm. He headed north, in the direction of the castle, the girl's voice from his dream still echoing in his head. He splashed though a puddle as he walked up to the castle gates.

    "What business have you at this hour?" said the guard, fingering his broadsword. "You ought to be in bed. Away with you!"

    Link wandered away, rejected. He had to get in that castle, somehow. He was thinking about giving up when he heard the voice of the girl again. "In the garden, on the eastern side, there is a secret way." So he started off in that direction, the cold wind battering the rain against him like small needles.

    In the garden, he stumbled upon a strange tile. He bent over to examine it. As he explored the area, he found three more identical stone squares, all situated in a pattern around some shrubbery. He reached into the bush, searching for some kind of door or a sign of an entrance. He suddenly came upon an open space, and before he could stop himself he was tumbling down into a hole.

    He fell with a splash. His lantern fell into the water, and it became pitch-black in the passage. He swam until he found the edge of the pool, and then groped around the sides until he found a space to hoist himself up out of the water. He started off down the dark passage, wet and cold. At the end of the passage, he saw a small light. "Link?" said a voice. Link, recognizing his uncle's voice, quickened his pace.

    His uncle had received multiple wounds to the head, and had been stabbed in the gut with a sword. Spitting blood, he said, "Take my weapons. Go... don't worry about me..."

    Link bent over his dying uncle. "No, we've got you out of--" but he was already dead. Fighting back tears, he grasped his uncle's shield, clipped the blade's sheath to his belt, and turned down the passage, straining to see in the gloom.

    He came upon a passage, lit dimly with torches along the walls. He spotted a soldier, and attempted to duck behind the corner, but it was too late. He'd already been spotted. The soldier, without warning, drew a knife and lunged at Link. Instinctively, he drew his own blade, and met the knife with a clash of steel. The guard, who had not been expecting this, reeled backward, and Link brought his sword up and across, slashing his enemy across the chest. Without thinking, he then swung the weapon at the side of the guard's skull.

    The guard fell, dead, at his feet. Link stood, not yet believing what he'd just done. He looked down at the weapon in his hand, at the blood on the blade's edge, the reality of killing another person slowly sinking in. Suddenly, a noise in the passage caused him to snap his head around. More soldiers were clattering down the corridor toward him. He searched franically for an exit, and found a narrow stone stairway. Clambering up the stairs as fast as he could, he came out into a crimson and gold passage; the floor lined with thick red carpet. He was inside Hyrule Castle.

    He jogged off to the right, not knowing exactly what he was looking for, guards only moments behind...

    well, thats all im going to do tonight.
    ill do more tomorrow, maybe...

    what do you think of it?
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    Canttouchthis04


    WOW! Very nice, I really liked how you started it out ^_^ Good job!
    "I arrested a man-lady once... who was legally named Phuck."
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    Duke of Fenmark
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    Mar 25 2005, 01:31 AM
    WOW! Very nice, I really liked how you started it out ^_^ Good job!

    thanks.

    if you've played A Link to the Past, this should be very familiar. :P
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    I love these kind of things, good work :D

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    Great Job! I can't wait until Chap. 2!
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    Ditto

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    Duke of Fenmark
    Mar 25 2005, 01:33 AM
    Canttouchthis21
    Mar 25 2005, 01:31 AM
    WOW!  Very nice, I really liked how you started it out ^_^  Good job!

    thanks.

    if you've played A Link to the Past, this should be very familiar. :P

    Exactly. LOL, I thought it sounded familiar...

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    Prydinho
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    looks good!!
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    When is chap.2 coming?

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    that sounds great!
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    Canttouchthis04


    Are you going to add chapter 2 soon?
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    Prydinho
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    yeah chp 2 when is it
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    Prydinho
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    make it really ood lol, i love da 1st 1 very funny n colever i love dose type of things
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