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ThereSheGoes, Yo!; Hey, my name's synty.
Topic Started: Jul 6 2006, 01:05 PM (75,334 Views)
raf_dominic
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Excited ka na ma disconnect synts? :lol2: wahahahahaha! :grin:


oks lang yan.. :P
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ThereSheGoes

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Aug 28 2006, 02:17 PM
raine: hi /posing thanks for dropping by ^_^
paysu: u hate MCS? y what happened??
mayan: thank goodness for that. haha hello beautiful! /kis
rey: afternoon /kis :hug: thanks ^_^ bakit wala ako sa tally? /e6 oh well talo rin naman ako eh /heh
dawn: aynaku sinabi mo pa. /heh thanks dawn! /kiz have a good day!
raf: over busy weekend. i get home so late. /heh thanks retard! i miss you too! goodluck sa exams! ung fic ko pala.. /heh and sabi pala ni paysu, iris ka ba daw dati? /kis2 :hug:
raymond: thanks raymond! ingat and God bless rin! /kis

Okay.. shiit kinakahabahan ako sobra. popost ko here yung isang short story na ginawa ko like months ago. lagay ko lang original version tapos ung butchered and improved chapter one.. nasa RB. freak-o!!!! omg kinakabahan ako. im shaking freak.

anyway.. original version:


NGITI

“Greg!” Hindi ko napigilan ang aking bibig na isigaw ang pangalan ng lalaki na kadadaan lang sa harap ko.

Nandito ako ngayon sa harap ng Mcdonald’s katipunan at hinihintay ang aking sundo ng biglang dumaan sa harap ko ang nagmamadaling lalake na minsan ay nagpatibok na ng aking puso.

“Cindy! What a surprise!”

Surprise nga. Ang mga naglalakihan niyang mga mata ay tila luluwa na sa gulat habang siya ay tumititig sa akin.

“Ye-yeah.. How are you? What are you doing all the way here.. in Katipunan?” Ayan na, nag-ingles na ako. Palibhasa, gusto niya laging ingles. Conyo nga naman.

Nagsimula ng bumalik sa dati nilang anyo ang kanyang mga mata.

“Well, I just passed by Ateneo. I can’t believe how much I missed the campus. It’s so different from UPLB. You can say I got pretty school-sick.” Tumawa siya at nakita ko ang mga pamilyar na linya na bumubuo sa gilid ng kanyang mga mata tuwing siya’y humahalakhak.

Napangiti rin ako. Hindi ko alam kung bakit. Nakakatuwa lang siya tignan.

“What about you? How are you doing? What are you doing outside?” Natigil ako sa pagtitig sa kanyang magandang mga mata at itinaas ang aking mga kilay.

“Are you alone?” Idinag-dag pa niya.

“Um..” Hinila ko ang aking mahabang buhok. Palagi kong ginagawa ito kapag hindi ako sigurado sa gagawin ko.

“Actually, my class just ended and I thought of buying myself a hot fudge sundae before heading home. I’m just waiting for Tonio to pick me up.”

“Oh, so you still got Tonio with you. That’s great.” Ngumiti siya ulit.

“Well I only ask him to pick me up on half-day coz I get lazy to drive but he’s mostly my mom’s now.” Pahabol ko.

Tumawa siya ng mahina at nginitian ako ulit. “I’ll have to agree. Driving takes up too much energy. It’s a great thing I’ve got a dorm in LB or God knows what will happen to me if I didn’t.”

“Hmm..” lamang ang aking naging imik sapagkat hindi ko alam kung ano ang dapat kong isagot doon.

“So um.. you got um.. um.. do you-” bulol-bulol niyang sinabi sabay kamot sa kanyang ulo.

Natawa ako. Nakakatawa eh!

“Greg, I don’t understand you.” Ngumiti ako upang kalmahin siya.

“I’m sorry.. I just..” Tinitigan niya ako na para bang inaaral niya ang aking mukha. “Cindy.. I don’t know.. I was just gonna ask if you we’re seeing someone new already.” Sabay kagat sa kanyang labi.

“Was that it?” Tinaasan ko siya ng kilay sabay ngiti.

Natawa siya sabay pahid sa pawis na tumulo sa kanyang noo. “I am such a loser.”

“And you just admitted it.”

“Ouch hon. Too harsh.”

“Just playing.”

“I know.”

“Hmm..”

“So are you?”

“What?”

“Seeing someone new?”

“Oh that! Um.. No. No.”

“Really?!”

“What is with that ‘Really?!’?”

Tumawa kami ng sabay. Na miss ko to. Na miss ko siya.

“What about you?” Tanong ko ng natigil na kami sa aming tawanan.

Bigla siyang sumimangot sabay kagat nanaman sa kanyang labi. Meron na.. Ang daldal ko talaga.

“Um.. There’s.. There’s this girl..” Nag-aalangan niyang sinabi.

“Right. Right.” Pinutol ko na. Bakit ko ba tinanong yun? Syempre meron na. Sa kagwapuhan ba naman niyang yan.

“No, it’s not yet a commitment thing or whatsoever.. We’re just close.” Paliwanag niya.

“Not yet.” Inulit ko.

“Cindy..”

“I’m sorry. It wasn’t my business.”

“It’s not that! I mean..”

“I have to go.”

“Why, is Tonio here already?”

“I think so.” Humarap ako sa parking sa harap ng Mcdonald’s at malaking pasalamat ko sa Diyos, andoon na at naka park ang pulang CRV ni mommy sa dulo habang si Tonio ay naninigarilyo sa tabi.

“I have to go.” Inulit ko.

“Oh, okay.” Ngumiti siya. Pilit na ngiti.

“It was great seeing you Greg, good luck in college.” Inipit ko ang aking bag sa aking kilikili sabay lakad paalis.

“It was great seeing you too Cindy. I missed you.”

Tumigil ako sa aking paglalakad, tumingin patalikod at binigyan ko siya ng pilit din na ngiti sa taas ng aking kanang balikat na para bang hindi ko narinig ang kanyang huling sinabi.


free form siya at sobrang magulo kasi hindi talaga ako magaling sa tagalog. edited and butchered to the core version:

http://ragnaboards.levelupgames.ph/index.php?showtopic=4589

yuber: hindi ko pa ma send sayo kasi nahiya na ako /heh pa comment nalang here since di ka pede sa RB :hug:

ewan ko kung bakit ko ginawa yun pero basta. salamat sa mga magbabasa. pagpasensyahan niyo po ako mejo rusty na talaga. matagal na akong hindi inspired. /heh

salamat sa lahat ng nagdaan /heh

God bless everyone! /kis

QUOTING FOR GREAT JUSTICE! baka sabihin niyo snob me /heh

sira ka raf :P

ayaw ko madisconnect. gusto ko happy ever after /gg

sige tulog na ako. :hug: /kis2

salamat ulit!!!

salamat rin sa mga dadaan.. kung meron! /heh

weee :smash:
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sweetdreams synts... /kis
maya ko na basahin, kakagising ko lng eh, mejo bangagers pa... :evil:

wala ka pa sa tally ksi later part ka na nag spam... mga 50pages pa ata nde ko nabibilang, nyahahahaha... :lol2:
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ang sad... >_>


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Here i come 2 save d day......

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Tnx SenSei.......
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dawn: thank u /posing sweet dreams nga /heh
rey: thank u /kis :hug: wag mo na ako count sayang energy mo /heh actually, wag ka na magcount ikaw naman winner eh /heh sweet dreams din /ok
paysu: bakit ka sad??
dabz: thank you!!! :hug:
reirei: hi sis /kis
ryobie: gandang umaga ^_^ thanks!

Thanks sa lahat ng dumaan :) Have a good day ang God bless everyone /kiz
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thank you :blush:

sweet dreams /kis

here's your cake ^_^ it's your favourite! lol miss u too :P

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