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ThereSheGoes, Yo!; Hey, my name's synty.
Topic Started: Jul 6 2006, 01:05 PM (75,335 Views)
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pdaan /kis

tc always & God Bless
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haha! amfufuness!


synty where you? missing again? /sob2 missing my retard..:hug: /kis2
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ThereSheGoes

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raine: hi /posing thanks for dropping by ^_^
paysu: u hate MCS? y what happened??
mayan: thank goodness for that. haha hello beautiful! /kis
rey: afternoon /kis :hug: thanks ^_^ bakit wala ako sa tally? /e6 oh well talo rin naman ako eh /heh
dawn: aynaku sinabi mo pa. /heh thanks dawn! /kiz have a good day!
raf: over busy weekend. i get home so late. /heh thanks retard! i miss you too! goodluck sa exams! ung fic ko pala.. /heh and sabi pala ni paysu, iris ka ba daw dati? /kis2 :hug:
raymond: thanks raymond! ingat and God bless rin! /kis

Okay.. shiit kinakahabahan ako sobra. popost ko here yung isang short story na ginawa ko like months ago. lagay ko lang original version tapos ung butchered and improved chapter one.. nasa RB. freak-o!!!! omg kinakabahan ako. im shaking freak.

anyway.. original version:


NGITI

“Greg!” Hindi ko napigilan ang aking bibig na isigaw ang pangalan ng lalaki na kadadaan lang sa harap ko.

Nandito ako ngayon sa harap ng Mcdonald’s katipunan at hinihintay ang aking sundo ng biglang dumaan sa harap ko ang nagmamadaling lalake na minsan ay nagpatibok na ng aking puso.

“Cindy! What a surprise!”

Surprise nga. Ang mga naglalakihan niyang mga mata ay tila luluwa na sa gulat habang siya ay tumititig sa akin.

“Ye-yeah.. How are you? What are you doing all the way here.. in Katipunan?” Ayan na, nag-ingles na ako. Palibhasa, gusto niya laging ingles. Conyo nga naman.

Nagsimula ng bumalik sa dati nilang anyo ang kanyang mga mata.

“Well, I just passed by Ateneo. I can’t believe how much I missed the campus. It’s so different from UPLB. You can say I got pretty school-sick.” Tumawa siya at nakita ko ang mga pamilyar na linya na bumubuo sa gilid ng kanyang mga mata tuwing siya’y humahalakhak.

Napangiti rin ako. Hindi ko alam kung bakit. Nakakatuwa lang siya tignan.

“What about you? How are you doing? What are you doing outside?” Natigil ako sa pagtitig sa kanyang magandang mga mata at itinaas ang aking mga kilay.

“Are you alone?” Idinag-dag pa niya.

“Um..” Hinila ko ang aking mahabang buhok. Palagi kong ginagawa ito kapag hindi ako sigurado sa gagawin ko.

“Actually, my class just ended and I thought of buying myself a hot fudge sundae before heading home. I’m just waiting for Tonio to pick me up.”

“Oh, so you still got Tonio with you. That’s great.” Ngumiti siya ulit.

“Well I only ask him to pick me up on half-day coz I get lazy to drive but he’s mostly my mom’s now.” Pahabol ko.

Tumawa siya ng mahina at nginitian ako ulit. “I’ll have to agree. Driving takes up too much energy. It’s a great thing I’ve got a dorm in LB or God knows what will happen to me if I didn’t.”

“Hmm..” lamang ang aking naging imik sapagkat hindi ko alam kung ano ang dapat kong isagot doon.

“So um.. you got um.. um.. do you-” bulol-bulol niyang sinabi sabay kamot sa kanyang ulo.

Natawa ako. Nakakatawa eh!

“Greg, I don’t understand you.” Ngumiti ako upang kalmahin siya.

“I’m sorry.. I just..” Tinitigan niya ako na para bang inaaral niya ang aking mukha. “Cindy.. I don’t know.. I was just gonna ask if you we’re seeing someone new already.” Sabay kagat sa kanyang labi.

“Was that it?” Tinaasan ko siya ng kilay sabay ngiti.

Natawa siya sabay pahid sa pawis na tumulo sa kanyang noo. “I am such a loser.”

“And you just admitted it.”

“Ouch hon. Too harsh.”

“Just playing.”

“I know.”

“Hmm..”

“So are you?”

“What?”

“Seeing someone new?”

“Oh that! Um.. No. No.”

“Really?!”

“What is with that ‘Really?!’?”

Tumawa kami ng sabay. Na miss ko to. Na miss ko siya.

“What about you?” Tanong ko ng natigil na kami sa aming tawanan.

Bigla siyang sumimangot sabay kagat nanaman sa kanyang labi. Meron na.. Ang daldal ko talaga.

“Um.. There’s.. There’s this girl..” Nag-aalangan niyang sinabi.

“Right. Right.” Pinutol ko na. Bakit ko ba tinanong yun? Syempre meron na. Sa kagwapuhan ba naman niyang yan.

“No, it’s not yet a commitment thing or whatsoever.. We’re just close.” Paliwanag niya.

“Not yet.” Inulit ko.

“Cindy..”

“I’m sorry. It wasn’t my business.”

“It’s not that! I mean..”

“I have to go.”

“Why, is Tonio here already?”

“I think so.” Humarap ako sa parking sa harap ng Mcdonald’s at malaking pasalamat ko sa Diyos, andoon na at naka park ang pulang CRV ni mommy sa dulo habang si Tonio ay naninigarilyo sa tabi.

“I have to go.” Inulit ko.

“Oh, okay.” Ngumiti siya. Pilit na ngiti.

“It was great seeing you Greg, good luck in college.” Inipit ko ang aking bag sa aking kilikili sabay lakad paalis.

“It was great seeing you too Cindy. I missed you.”

Tumigil ako sa aking paglalakad, tumingin patalikod at binigyan ko siya ng pilit din na ngiti sa taas ng aking kanang balikat na para bang hindi ko narinig ang kanyang huling sinabi.


free form siya at sobrang magulo kasi hindi talaga ako magaling sa tagalog. edited and butchered to the core version:

http://ragnaboards.levelupgames.ph/index.php?showtopic=4589

yuber: hindi ko pa ma send sayo kasi nahiya na ako /heh pa comment nalang here since di ka pede sa RB :hug:

ewan ko kung bakit ko ginawa yun pero basta. salamat sa mga magbabasa. pagpasensyahan niyo po ako mejo rusty na talaga. matagal na akong hindi inspired. /heh

salamat sa lahat ng nagdaan /heh

God bless everyone! /kis
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HI synty gandang hapon...chuwi d ako nka spam nung sunday umuwi kc ako

sa bukid wakakka.....

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
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Tnx SenSei.......
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IDOLO kew daan lng stress tab sexy mo~ /kis
My wholesome THREAD! /e9 /e9 /e9
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Waaa! I like that version kesa nasa RB. sobrang short cut..:grin:
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haha nice and short. ang galing! i'm familiar to both UPLB and katips area. hehe wla lang.
patunayan mo na level 10 Pulot Quicken ka. /gg
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@raf

un nga eh.. parehas kayo sabi ni yuber. wag daw ako magisip kasi nga creative writing daw. kaso ayan puro sentence structure at kung anu anong literature shiit ang pinagana ko. oh well.. luluwagan ko nalang ng onti. /no1

thanks retard /kis2 :hug:

@dawn

thank you so much for appreciating. /kis

@jackie

sige ingat ka idol sexy stresstab kew /kis

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Good news everybody!

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Re:Wifey?, Today, 02:25 PM
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Gimme your alias. I can't think of anything for GM*Hero's wife. Since as far as I know you've been reading from the start, I will give you this loyalty award. Nyahaha. PM ASAP. ^_____^

...and your YM ID too, if that's not much of a trouble.

omg! omg! wow!!!! yay!!!!

thank you charlie!!!! um.. SYNTY? u can use my real name!!! ^_^

ym id: iloveskateboards

sorry now lang i got busy this weekend. :(

THANK YOU SO MUCH! DREAM COME TRUE!!!! :lol:


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wooots~! dream come true... :wub:
patunayan mo na level 10 Pulot Quicken ka. /gg
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wahahahaha! bwahahaha! flirt! :lol2: joke retard! :hug: /kis2

don't worry andito pa ako kapag na DISCONNECT ka ni GM*Hero..:lol2:
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dawn: oo! :lol2: wow inspired na ba ako?! :lol2:
raf: flirt?! /omg

/gg

loyal daw kasi ako /heh

sana hindi niya ako disconnect /sob2 omg! what if ban niya ako?! /sob2

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

/sob2

okay lang, andyan pa naman si raf eh /e4

thank you! :hug: /kis2
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patunayan mo na level 10 Pulot Quicken ka. /gg
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andito ako pag nadisconnect ka..

doing this oh ----> :lol2:



wahahahaha! :grin: joke retard..:lol2:
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:censored: ka raf wag mo ko pagtawanan! ban mo rin siya! /sob2

kunyari may thingy ka rin :lol2:

di niya ako ban love niya ko eh :P

@dawn

sobrang masaya! excited na ako!!! woooooot :wohoo:
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