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Please spare some time and take a look at it..; A poem written by me.. Read nyo po.. TY!
Topic Started: Nov 26 2005, 04:15 PM (585 Views)
angelrider
Wont you just DIE !!!
What do you guys/girls think of this po?
Self made ko po sya..
Dedicated to someone i really really like in my school...
I'm open for good and bad comments po... /no1

Eto po sana magustuhan nyo:

A Stupid Writing
By: angelrider

I really like you, but I hate rejection
I can’t get near you, ‘cause it draws attention
Sometimes I could just shout and tell you,
But I’m afraid you’ll just say objection
I guess some things are really
Better left unmentioned

What should I do, so that you’ll know this
I can’t express it to you, you are my bliss
The sight of you, can’t make one help but smile
As I say to myself, please let’s stop and talk awhile
I cannot mingle like your regular friends
How I wish I could, but I just can’t blend

That very sweet smile, noticing it seems inevitable
It can clear dark skies, even alter oblivion
Your hair always arranged in the most simple way
I could always recognize you, even many miles away
Exchanging looks and smiles, sends a rush through my body
But that’s all I can d, ‘cause there’s a certain incapability

Within your eyes I lost my place, could stay awhile
And I’m melting in your eyes, like my first time that I caught fire
When you get lonely, if no one’s around
Know that I’ll catch you when you’re falling down
Maybe someday I will see you again
And you’ll look me in my eyes and call me your friend

I really really like you, that’s all I need to know
I really really like you, I just wanted to say so


Please post po kayo ng comments ha? :pls: and /thx
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I know you well enough to know you'll never love me..

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almario
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Ganda pre.. daming mga TORPEdo katulad ko ang matatamaan dyan /heh
WWWaaaGGG mmOOOO CliiiiIKK!!
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Nagaalangang bumalik.. La Sig.. Pinagsabihan kasi /sob
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-=sweet_charisse=-
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oh my... its lovely....

if she read this poem im sure she'l be honored and flattered...


common have the guts to express ur feelings for her... say to her exactly what you feel.. u'l never know she may like u too and juz waiting for you to make a move... ;)
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Crazy As Ever!!!

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almario
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^uu nga..
Pre set as an example mo na lng ung mga nagbabasag..
hinde cla yayaman hanggat hinde sila sumusugal.. wala naman mawawala sa kanila eh.. its just a game ika nga.. hinde naman cla yayaman ng ganun kung hinde babasagin nila ung +9s nila para gawing +10

peo katulad nga ng basagan.. kung nakaisa kang +10.. easy la dahil pag nagbasag ka pa ng isang +9 baka mawala ung dalawa sau /no1
WWWaaaGGG mmOOOO CliiiiIKK!!
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Nagaalangang bumalik.. La Sig.. Pinagsabihan kasi /sob
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ahihihih... nag example pa...


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Crazy As Ever!!!

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Guxelicious Guxiepop™
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he kept on waiting... ƒorever.

i'd rather be rejected THAN be left behind by your loved one.

nice composition nonetheless /no1
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part 2
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angelrider
Wont you just DIE !!!
uu nga guys eh.. dami din nagsabi nyan sa akin.. but there's 1 major prob...
she's already taken... :cry:

di ko din nga alam kung anu ba pumipigil sa akin para sabihin yun eh.. /hmm
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/e11 d ko alam na marunong pa pala sa poem writing
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angelrider
Wont you just DIE !!!
hehehe !! di ko nga din po alam na magagawa ka yun eh.. /heh

it just so happened na gusto ko din sumulat nun time na ginawa ko yan.. /heh
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chenee
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nice one..
i saw u iRL and u have nmn da luks pra inde ma-reject go 4 it..
/heh
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thnx to marc`anthony for my nice sig. ^ ^
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nice poem

sayng nga lng she's taken na
"QUIERO COMPARTIR EL RESTO DE MI VIDA CONTIGO"/lv
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w|shing... hOping...
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sweet. :)
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º Gypsies º
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Angel`
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same tayo situation.. ang hirap kasi sabihin since taken n ung girl.. :(
I've been through w/ love..
w/ all the hurt and w/ all the pain..


yet here you go again...


a smile,
a word,
a hug,
a call...


am i climbing the heavens again just to fall?
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angelrider
Wont you just DIE !!!
you said it pareng angel !! /no1

@chocolove
parang kilala nga din kita eh.. taga morong ka di ba? siguro di kita kilala sa muka at iRL, pero sa pRO kilala kita.. /heh
thanks sa comment at compliment?.. /heh

@majo, demeter
thanks po !! /thx

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t(°°, t) Lo mEjOr
nabasa ko na yan ah :lol3: jowk lang!!



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sa 18 robie samin tayo!!
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/lv thankz miss synty :hug: h3h3h3, panalo ang sig na to!
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