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| Tweet Topic Started: Aug 1 2013, 04:29 PM (117 Views) | |
| thatoneturtle | Aug 1 2013, 04:29 PM Post #1 |
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Username: thatoneturtle Preferred Name: Krayo Age (optional): Years role-playing: 3 Favorite Genre: yaoi Least favorite genre: Don't have one Anything you’d like to add: Role-playing Sample: Just off the shore of sea lay a small village that went by the name of Long Leaf and in this village a boy of the name Kai was born 19 year's ago. Both of Kai's parent's died when he was 7 year's old and he was taken care of by his Granny Lin until he was old enough to look after himself. People often said he looked like his mother who had Dark brown hair and beautiful dark green eyes. Kai was of average weight and his skin was tanned due to him spending all of his free time with his grandpa on the fishing boat. Kai was a very shy child growing up so he didn't have much friend's. But he did have one friend, her name was Mia and they were close growing up. Kai love'd to draw it was a hobby that he hope'd one day would make him famous. He usually sat by the boat dock and drew sketches for tourist's to take with them charging no more than $8 a piece. There was always something about the sea that just washed away all of Kai's fear's and bad memories, especially the one's of watching his parent's being slaughter'd in front of him. When Kai was 17 he left his little town of Long Leaf and ventured forth to Paris. France being well know for it's artistic talent's he hope'd he could secure his future as an artist there. Kai was usually such a calm and kind person but sometimes his friend Mia brought out the worst in him. She went to Paris with Kai when he specifically told her not to. The year Kai and Mia came to Paris she confess'd her love to him, But Kai didn't...Couldn't return her feeling's, he just didn't feel the same way about her, in fact he didn't even think of girl's in that way. Despite his parent's death Kai stood tall and hardly let anything take him down, but everyone has their off day's and Kai sure had his, they were just a bit more emotional than normal. He would always sit by a river or pond to calm himself down when thing's got tough. It reminded him of everything that was good in his life. Kai tried his hardest to impress those with his artistic talent, but making it no further than drawing sketches on the street and charging people for it. He went to many famous artist's asking them if he could be their apprentice all of which turned him down. His dream's of becoming a famous artist were slowly going down the drain. When he almost gave up hope he had a break and was taken in as an apprentice to a well known artist. He was an Apprentice for a little over a year, but thing's weren't going so well as he kept getting told that he was not that good of an artist which took him down too many times, He only wished he could bring a smile to people's face's and become a well known artist. That was far from what was happening. He didn't want to give up though. That was far from his mind now, trying harder every time someone took him to ground level he would get up twice as fast. For month's he search'd for someone willing to take him on, finally a week after his 19th birthday he got a break as an apprentice who appreciated his skill of art and gladly took him on as an apprentice. Now Kai is successfully studying under someone and appreciating every bit of it, all of the pain and struggling may be worth it after all. |
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| Dreamy Ideal | Aug 1 2013, 05:11 PM Post #2 |
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***Denied*** Hi there Krayo. I'm denying this for one very big problem that jumped out at me: the abundance of apostrophes. You have a lot of them where they shouldn't be, like in the words hoped and confessed. There are also quite a few grammar mistakes in there, 'much friends' instead of 'many friends' being one example. But you're more than welcome to submit another application! If you need any help or want to ask any questions just PM me, or drop a message in the cbox :3 |
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I wonder why it is I don't argue like this with anyone but you | |
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