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Pyropixie's Application; Not a Fairy
Topic Started: May 19 2011, 01:39 AM (170 Views)
Pyropixie
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Username: Pryopixie

Preferred Name: PP, Pyro, as long as it isn't 'babe'

Age (optional): 21

Years role-playing: 11 years

Favorite Genre: Fantasy, Modern, Sci-fi, Horror

Least favorite genre: I...don't...really...know...
Anything you’d like to add: Um, nothing that I can think of but I'm sure an idea will slither it's way into my head as soon as I am done posting.

Ah there it is.

Hi, my name is Pyropixie, and I discovered your site while looking for a new place to roleplay. I am currently studying to be a history professor and am living on my own. I hope that I will meet lots of fun people to roleply with here!


Role-playing Sample:

"Agent, Agent Clarke!"

Virgil Clarke snapped out of the daze he had fallen into, actually it was something akin to shock as he blinked and became aware of his surroundings. It was a minimalist, and utilitarian office with beige brown walls and a carpet the colour of a soot covered pigeon. It was his boss's office he knew that much but why was he here? Virgil looked up at the stern but concerned face of his Boss.

"Did you hear me, Clarke?" he asked.

"No, sir. I'm sorry what were you talking about? The McAllen Case?" Virgil asked hopefully, his hope dashed when a pained looked crossed the older man's face.

"No.. It was your lover, Virgil, he was shot in the park today....he's dead."

Virgil felt the same pounding in his head he had felt earlier and the room suddenly felt as is all the air had been sucked from it. He gasped in the airless vacuum and gripped the arm rests of the chair to keep himself from hyperventilating.

"No."

"We got the call this afternoon while you were out, he was found in the park by a couple of kids."

"No. No that can't-" Virgil rasped, unable to get enough air to his lungs, fuck, why wasn't there any air?

"I'm sorry Clarke, Virgil, Anthony's gone."

This must be some horrible morbid joke the boys were playing on him, because if it was this was sick. Anthony couldn't be dead, he'd, Virgil himself had just seen him this morning, They had ate together, and kissed and now they were telling him that he was dead. The office blurred wildly and his ears seemed to be muffled by cotton.

"Clarke! Virgil!"

The boss sounded so far away, but Virgil didn't care. Anthony's dead, Anthony's dead, Anthony's dead echoed in his mind until he knew nothing else but this simple, horrible truth.
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Purple Butterfly Pills
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Welcome to our little nook!

I want to know how people are finding us through searches, god willing I can’t find us if I were to ever forget the URL…

Anyways, Hope you enjoy your time here. There is only a couple of things I’d like to say about your RP Sample. Embellish, embellish, embellish. Outside of dialogue, the narrative should be captivating. Explain about what your character is feeling. Yes, an airless vacuum is a wonderful comparison… but how does he feel. Did his skin suddenly lose feeling? Is he cold? Did a desperate sweat break out along his hair line? Etc. etc. Also… If this is an introduction, please remember to add in physical description of the people involved.

Other than that, I look forward to seeing great things from you.

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