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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 12 2010, 09:51 PM (170 Views) | |
| Zerath | Apr 12 2010, 09:51 PM Post #1 |
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((Okay, so, I hope I understood Dreamy right when she told me how to go about this. ^^;;;)) Username: Zerath Preferred Name: Zerath Age (optional): 19 Years role-playing: Around 9 Favorite Genre: Medieval/Fantasy Least favorite genre: Steampunk (I have NOOOOO idea how to play that) Anything you’d like to add: Um...Dreamy invited me here? Other than that, nothing comes to mind. ^^;;; Role-playing Sample: A sigh of relief escaped Kayra's mouth when she spotted and empty bench up ahead. She had been walking around the city all day, trying to get messages and notes and orders delivered for the temple in an attempt to keep the city in one piece, and her feet were killing her. It had only been a week ago that Venea had shown up at the temple, hurt, poisoned, and near death...When the city had found out there had almost been anarchy. Who could possibly have gone after their beloved goddess? Was this an act of war, was the city in danger? She had been in the Imperial City with the other deities, were they attacked as well, had the tensions between those favoring religion and those favoring the monarchy finally snapped? To put it simply...Things had been bad. But that had been a week ago. Things were still tense in the city, people were on edge, but Venea was recovering. Slowly, but she was recovering. So it just figured that now a new bit of trouble was floating in. There were broken reports and rumors of an invasion in the north, that the demons were on the assault. And with their protector incapacitated and the Lord Templar of the city's knight, Karim Zeki, missing... Maybe calling the city "tense" was a bit of an understatement. And things weren't too bad. Karim might be missing, but Arashi had brought some former Silverhand Knight with her when she made it back to the city a few days ago. He had more or less been dumped into the job of working on protection, mainly thanks to Arashi's persuasion and recommendation. Rumor was he was a bit of a drunk, though... And Venea was doing fine. Elessa was by her side night and day. They weren't letting her into see the goddess anymore, but, they assured her Venea was doing fine. They let Riven in, though, of course. Sure, he was Venea's bodyguard, but...Well, he hadn't done a very good job of that, now had he? With a sigh as she took her seat, though, she forced those thoughts away. Venea would be dead, if not for him. She just, she wished there was something she could do. Venea was the only one that had any confidence in her. But with the goddess mainly spending her time asleep, recovering...with Riven in there watching over her...she couldn't really do much about the situation, could she? The harpy had found that Elessa had even started putting herbs to make her sleep in the tea mix she got from her, out of a belief she was fooling herself into thinking she could actually do "whatever she had to do" to help Venea, and that her desire to prove she could was endangering her health. Kayra was inclined to agree, now that she had stopped taking the tea. She still had a job to do, Venea had entrusted her as her messenger, but...Why should she bother? Venea had better people than her to seek help from. Riven, who seemed to rival Kayra's devotion for the goddess (even if he was a man and thus, in Kayra's eyes, untrustworthy), and Arashi, for example. No one needed a burden like her around... "Excuse me miss, is this seat taken?" The harpy jumped, startled out of her thoughts when someone spoke to her. Looking up, she saw a face that was becoming rather known in the city lately. Johnathan Montrose, a traveling doctor who had volunteered to take over Elessa's other duties to the people while Venea took up most of her time. He was a quiet man, and rather reserved, but he knew what he was doing and if nothing else, people respected him. He wasn't altogether bad looking, either, but...Well, he was a man, and that was all Kayra needed to not trust him. That feeling wasn't helped at all by a queer feeling the man gave her...But she couldn't be rude, and shaking her head, she moved over on the bench, letting him sit down. "Thank you, Lady Kayra...I've been delivering medicine to people all day, I could use a break." he said, looking over at the wingless harpy with a friendly smile, pushing his small glasses back up onto his nose. The harpy gave gave him a forced smile and a terse nod, and seeing this, he frowned. "Is something wrong?" "Oh, n-no...I'm just tired...You c-caught me while I was thinking..." "Ah, my apologies, my lady...Beautiful day, isn't it? he said, looking around. And it was...If one looked up, they could see several winged humans, harpies, flying through the air and enjoying life. But not her...Not since those rapists had cut off her wings nearly three years ago. I...Y-Yes...It's a beautiful day... Kayra said, her voice getting soft... |
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| Dreamy Ideal | Apr 12 2010, 10:04 PM Post #2 |
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you can be king
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***Approved*** Your sample was good doll, not much to say about it negatively. You were missing a few closing quotation marks at the end but we all have a punctuation mark mistake from time to time. Also, try not to bold or otherwise emphasis your dialogue. Just a suggestion, and just for appearance sake. Welcome to High Voltage doll. Enjoy yourself~. |
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