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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 29 2010, 09:58 AM (159 Views) | |
| Yabanko | Jan 29 2010, 09:58 AM Post #1 |
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Username: Yabanko Preferred Name: Yabanko Age (optional): 18 Years role-playing: About 5 years, give or take Favorite Genre: Yaoi, Action, Adventure, Romance, Sci-Fi, mpreg Least favorite genre: Hetero, Yuri Anything you’d like to add: I also like Role playing in the following Animes/Games: Zelda, Sonic, BLEACH, Avatar, X-Men, and a Variety of Original role plays Role-playing Sample: ((This is from another role play I did on a different site)) Shiro awoke in his bed, comfortable and warm next to his lover Haru. As he stirred to keep the warmth of his naked body, Haru's eyes slowly fluttered open. Their eyes met and Shiro smiled warmly. "I love you" he said in a whisper to the other male. The growing smile on Haru's lips making his grow all the more. They stayed in each other's arms, cozy and warm until they decided they were hungry and needed breakfast. The couple dressed and headed for the kitchen of the large mansion-like home in Hekinan, Japan. Shiro's family was quite wealthy as his father owned a very upscale and well known business. Making an American 5 million in little over a year. The cooks knew of the love these two males had and always kept secret when Haru spent the night. As for his family, they all assumed Haru came early that morning. Or at least that was what the two thought. As they enjoyed their breakfast. The door chime sounded and they could hear one of Shiro's brothers, Ichiro, answer the door. Three more voices added to the conversation. three Shiro did not know. Two females and a male. One female sounded young. As they listened as best they could to the conversation in the next room over, another of Shiro's brothers, Jiro, walked into the kitchen to get breakfast as well. Seeing Haru, he smiled. "Your going to have a great day today Shiro" He stated sarcastically. Seeing the curious frown on his brother's face he decided to elaborate a little. "One of father's business partners are here with his wife and daughter. Has father told you about her?" Shiro shook his head no. He was not told about anyones daughter. or if they had, he did not care to listen. He didn't like females. Jiro was about to explain the situation when their father walked in with their guests and his eldest brother Ichiro. "Shiro. This is Mr. Amoto. His wife, and daughter Akina. Your fiancee" he explained. "My what!" he exclaimed in shock as he looked at Haru in hopes he did not believe he was betrothed. he than turned back to his father for an explanation. "When you were 10 you were promised to Mr. Amoto's daughter when we closed out business deal." "I am not your property that you can just use as a condition to grow your business!" Shiro snapped as he stood to face his father. "I am your father and I may use you as I please. The marriage is taking place tomorrow. Send Haru home so you can prepare!" his father ordered harshly. Shiro's firm and angered expression quickly turned to disbelief and sorrow. He looked at Ichiro who looked rather pleased about the situation, than to Jiro who was frowning. Shiro than looked at Haru. |
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| Purple Butterfly Pills | Jan 29 2010, 06:46 PM Post #2 |
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**Approved** I’ll approve it but I’ll also add in a couple of tips. (Well… just one.) Don’t rely on dialogue alone. Write about emotions and inner thoughts as well. Like, when Shiro is told about his fiancé, don’t just rely on simply saying that the tone in his voice was shock. Go deeper than that. Why was he shocked, what else may he have been thinking when he saw the fiancé, etc etc. Just to lengthen out the paragraphs instead of the majority of the post being pure dialogue. It gives the other player something more to write off of. |
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[align=center]Live each day like it's your last...[/align] [align=right]Because it very well could be...[/align] | |
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