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APPLICATION- Aqua'tica
Topic Started: Feb 1 2010, 05:58 PM (291 Views)
Aqua'tica

GLOBAL NAME: The Dazzler

CHARACTER NAME: Aqua'tica

POWERSET/ARCHETYPE: Ice/blaster

CHARACTER INFORMATION: Aqua'tica is new to Paragon, having reached the age to be able to venture out from the safety of Atlantis and join her people in the new world as they battle to keep the darkness at bay before it has a chance to threaten Atlantis. In her short time, she has learned that the residents of this new world can be quite crude, although she has found many to be polite. She chooses not to dwell on the negative experiances as she attempts to keep a positive dispostion. Aqua'tica uses her special ability to control water and temperature to draw moisture from the surrounding air and turn it to ice to use as a weapon.

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Nereidia
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While admitting the history is simple, a young Atlantean travels to Paragon to help her brethren, I'm also wondering just how much of our lore you actually read. The Chosen are not really 'battling to keep the darkness at bay.' They originally came to find the king's killer, and are now helping Leviathas to protect Paragon. I'm kinda of hoping you'll flush out her history/background a bit more.

With that said -- the name has got to go. Direct from our VirtueVerse OOC info page:

"The naming convention can be Greek, Roman, or a play on nautical terms. Look, no names like Aqua Dude or Mermaid Woman. That ain't happenin'."

Granted, there have been a few exceptions, but those had been discussed with the leader and approved beforehand.
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Cade Lawson
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Nereidia
Feb 2 2010, 02:16 AM
While admitting the history is simple, a young Atlantean travels to Paragon to help her brethren, I'm also wondering just how much of our lore you actually read. The Chosen are not really 'battling to keep the darkness at bay.' They originally came to find the king's killer, and are now helping Leviathas to protect Paragon. I'm kinda of hoping you'll flush out her history/background a bit more.

With that said -- the name has got to go. Direct from our VirtueVerse OOC info page:

"The naming convention can be Greek, Roman, or a play on nautical terms. Look, no names like Aqua Dude or Mermaid Woman. That ain't happenin'."

Granted, there have been a few exceptions, but those had been discussed with the leader and approved beforehand.

Not quite the hassle it usually is either. Aqua'tica, I noticed that you went from a level 1 MA/Regen scrapper to a level 21 ice/something blaster - that can only mean "rename".

I think it's a pretty cool toon concept (albeit, in need of a bit more detail). If you're agreeable, you can change the name again for free...well...until the 28th, anyway.
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