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APPLICATION- Atlantic Titan
Topic Started: Jan 19 2010, 09:10 PM (941 Views)
Atlantic Titan

GLOBAL NAME: @Azrael the ArchAngel

CHARACTER NAME: Atlantic Titan

POWERSET/ARCHETYPE: Willpower Super Strength/ Tank

CHARACTER INFORMATION:When Alcander was a young boy he went on a fishing trip with his father. Being a very religious boy every night he prayed that Poseidon would take care of him and his father on their voyage. One night the waves got rough and a storm brewed. Lightning flashed and the waves tossed the ship across the ocean. A single bolt of lightning struck the ship and ripped a hole straight through the hull. The crew had to abandon ship in fear they would sink with the ship. Alcander, his father, and other crew men got onto a life boat but the mighty tides swallowed the boat. All Alcander could do was pray that everything would be alright. Poseidon then blessed him with gills and super human strength that allowed him to survive the crash. His father and crew men however did not. Two Mermen passing by found Alcander in a bed of seaweed and brought him back to Atlantis. There the elders determined that Poseidon had blessed them a gift of a human boy.

Years passed and Alcander learned to control his Super Human strength. His adoptive parents Galen and Neoma were very supportive through his changes from human to Merman. His skin changing from brown to a bright blue. His eyes developed to glow a deep blue color. When Alcander turned 18 he joined the Atlantic Army as an act of gratitude to thank and protect the city that took care of him. One night he and some other troops went out on the town. Parting on the pier he met a beautiful girl by the name of Selena. Kinda short brunette, with eyes of hazel. They talked and learn more of each other. She is the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. She saw him as a big yet sorta timid guy with a mysterious past. As time past they fell in love and were inseparable.

One day Alcander was summon forth by the elders. "We've been asked to send some of our troops to help Paragon City with the invasion of the Rikti. You and others will be shipped out tomorrow." Alcander didn't want to leave to the love of his life and decided he wanted to abandon the mission and run away with her. "Run away with me Selena. We will be happy together." She told him that she would be fine here and there was no reason to worry.

Months passed and the war was pretty much over. The affect were many casualties, but many Atlantic survivors, including Alcander, remained. Him and other survivors were returning home from the battle. He had nothing on his mind but returning to the love of his life. He decided that night he wanted Selena to be his wife. When they returned however, it wasn't the sight they expected to see. Atlantis had been destroyed and dead bodies laid all around. It was like they hadn't even left the war zone. One of the elders laid alive on his death bed. He cried about how the Rikti had invaded that night while the survivors were returning home. The Atlantic militia had fended them off but the battle had came with a great price.

Hearing the news Alcander rushed to the home of his beloved Selena. Breaking the door down just to see his love brutality slaughtered in her own house. Laying there motionless, so beautiful. Blood stained the walls and floor. He dropped the floor and grabbed his dead love and hugged her. Her skin so dry and cold.

A memorial was held for those died in the Rikti attack. Atlantis is now more beautiful and active than ever. The Rikti haven't returned to Atlantis since the attack. As for Alcander not much is known. It is believed he roams in Paragon battling Rikti and other threats. Protecting people from feeling the lost of heart he has. He searches for others like him, others he can relate to. He searches for a family, a place he can call... home.

SCREENSHOT of character: More impressive in person.
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Leviathas
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If your costume is more impressive than your application, that's not saying much.

Dude, what the hell is this? Did you even read the SGs lore? I don't think you did. The Rikti attacked Atlantis? Dude. No. Just NO.

Denied.
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Atlantic Titan

((Well damn, make a nigga say sorry for tryin, I honestly dnt give a fuck if u denied me or not but make it good reason. Whoa Rikti invasion is so unbeliveable, it only happens in Atlas every 10 mins. I just added what i belived to be a good story and if you dnt like it kiss my ass, and if u got a problem wit me, do something bout it. But for a damn Rikti invasion? Whoa why not take off the fact that yall are in Paragon. I read that whole damn Character Creator thing and no where did it say "NO RIKTI". Nigga its a fuckin story, yank the stick outta ur ass (yeah its real deep in there huh?). And for those of you that think I aint got shit better to do than talk shit, i dont, im in math class. Point is, a SG Leader is supposed to help his crew and members and to critize someone one single thing then deny him cause of that than to help him improve it make me wonder what even interested me in the SG in the first place and the members here should give this a serious thought.

Consider yourself VERBALLY WRECKED,
Alcandar))
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Nereidia
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Aaand we're done.../ignore.
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Klymene
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Sweet Dollirot Kallidora/Sybellea/Nephelea
There was absolutely no need to be belligerent. Someone should lock this thread however. :)
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Cade Lawson
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Klymene
Jan 20 2010, 04:32 PM
There was absolutely no need to be belligerent. Someone should lock this thread however. :)

Actually, these threads should be Hall of famed.

There are some really golden ones on record. I refer you to "dinosaurs held up Atlantis".
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Leviathas
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I was wrecked ya'll. Verbally. Da-


YA'LL WANNA GO RIDE BIKES LATER?
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Seventy-Seven
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An apology is needed here, or at least I feel I need to make one.

Azrael is some what of a friend of mine we used to kick it in a SG on Freedom. I have no idea if he even knows I am a part of this SG but for the most part he is a fairly decent guy. Had I known he was going to submit an application I would have tried to help guide him with a back story.

Levi is blunt and upfront, he won't sugar coat things for you, he WILL tell you how it is. Unlike our SG on freedom they don't mind turning down people with this SG it's more about quality than quantity, the quality here is in the RP.

So to Azrael I am sorry your application was turned down, if you still want in and it's ok with the "bosses" I will help you come up with a suitable back story.

And to levi sorry for the language used and the insults thrown your way.

In away this is one of my greatest fears old friends clashing with new friends.
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Atlantic Titan

(( I guess I should apologize myself. There was no reason for me to use ignorant language and I shouldn't have replied so rash and harsh. I didn't 77 was in here and he's a old time friend of mine, and any friend of his is a friend of mine. I was having a bad day and I regret what was said. I obviously can't take it back but I am willing to forget if you are.))
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Leviathas
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77, you don't owe me anything in the way of an apology. You've always been on the up and up with all of us. You're liked more than you probably know.

As for Titan, I've been called everything under the sun. None of it offends me anymore.

Nevertheless, I must do the right thing and admit that I was harsh with my initial response. I could have said something different. I make no excuse for it, because it's not in my nature to make excuses. It's simply what I felt at the time. That being said, I understand and accept responsibility for being the catalyst that caused your initially

My suggestion to you would be to review what others have written here. Review the virtueverse page. Asking questions prior to application is also a good idea. You can always approach us in game. Most of us are friendly and more than willing to help you create a character that would fit our supergroup.

What I need you to understand, however, is that this is an RP supergroup, driven by the creation of stories and the development of characters. We don't really dabble in the usual jackassery that takes place in game. All the "lolwtf faggit" kind of shit. That's not us. In fact, this SG has sealed a place as a respected SG. Not because it's a top 100 SG, or because we're super elite pvpers; we're neither of those things. But what we are, is constant in our interaction with each other and the community and we hold our writing and roleplay to high standards.
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An apology is due on behalf of myself, CJ. The guy saw me in Pocket D making some costume changes, and thought Takaroa looked cool, and asked if the SG was recruiting. I told him that I had only been a part of the SG for a few days, and to check out your virtueverse page, and read the lore concerning Atlantis. I said "be creative, but stay within the EoA lore.". He asked me about a character history, and I told him to email it to me and I will help edit it and point out mistakes, warning him that I am brutally honest. I got the app he submitted above, replied to him to "Keep it simple. The Rikti invasion of Atlantis didn't happen. Take that out. Read the lore. Here's the link to the Lore of Atlantis. Stay within the lore.". Well, I talked to him online, and he told me he sent the app in BEFORE he sent it to me. I winced, knowing what would happen. I told him to go back and edit his app, making the necessary adjustments. After reading the above, I am sorry I didn't stress the importance of adhering to the importance of SG lore. I understand completely concerning well developed SG's and VG's and their respective histories.

Jason aka Takaroa

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Leviathas
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ain't no bigger.

/e respawn all players

There. We get a do-over.
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Cade Lawson
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Apology farm.
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Atlantic Titan

After being in Freedom thats all I want , I'm extremely sick of all the griefing and all the annoying people over there (guess I picked up some bad habits) I will look over the SG lore, I must've missed it or something
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Atlantic Titan
Jan 21 2010, 06:52 AM
After being in Freedom thats all I want , I'm extremely sick of all the griefing and all the annoying people over there (guess I picked up some bad habits) I will look over the SG lore, I must've missed it or something

Yea that's my biggest reason to come here from Freedom, I got tired of all the BS.

Virtue seems like a nice place but I can see more people here from Freedom everyday, not saying Freedom is bad or anything, just different.
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