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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 1 2010, 12:01 AM (278 Views) | |
| Dariuse | Jan 1 2010, 12:01 AM Post #1 |
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Global Name: Helios Wulf Screen Name: Dariuse Build/Arch-type: Storm/Sonic Defender Appearance: Athletic looking. Still has the look of a 17 year old even though hes about a 100 year older. Caucasian around 6 feet. Clean shaven, Eyes as blue as the sea that he loves. Description: My name is Dariuse. I'm nobody special. I am a 7th generation Atlantean. I take pride in where i come from. People say that Atlantis is this amazing, advanced cultured city. Well we are. We have the greatest military, the most advanced technology and well our people are beautiful. I lived with my parents of course...well back in my old life. My mother, she was just that, a mother. She stayed at home, took care of me, i could tell her anything. My father and i weren't so close. he worked for our great city as an alchemist. The only test subject he had was me. See where this is going? He did massive amounts of experiments on me. Every single potion he made, he tested on me. . Now the potion that changed my life forever could be seen as a failure or a success depending on which side you look at it. I was in my fathers study when i saw this, Green glowing vial. since i was a child i was curious. I opened the vial and drank the strange liquid. After that everything was a blur. I passed out. I woke on on a stone tables surrounded by priests in the temple of Poseidon. The priests told me that something happened. I became able to summon storms and use my voice in such a way that it would actually hurt people. It was like a sonic boom. Although i think i got that from my mother. She would yell so loud that everything inside and outside of the house would shake. I thought myself a freak. I was sent to the temple of Poseidon. There the priests and priestess studied me like some animal. I was studied for months and they couldn't figure out what happened. For years i decided to ignore the powers i had. if i didn't think of them they would go away...at least that's what i thought. Being my parents were old enough they were sent to war to protect Atlantis. At age 16 i was orphaned. At age 16 i was sent to the military. Here they taught me great military tactics and combat skills that i would use later on in life. they made me train my powers. The priests that studied me so many years before were my mentors. they told me i had Poseidon's gift and i was obligated to use it at any means necessary. This obviously meant i was going to war. I was faced with two options. I could abandon the greatest city in the world and be an outcast to most Atlanteans or i could stay fight and most likely die. That night i ran, i ran like the wind..I ran because i had something to run for. As a child i heard rumors of some weird earth walking city called "Paragon city" Here all heroes joined, trained and fought together as one. Something that reminded me very much of the Atlantean army. I spent weeks traveling to this place. I finally reached this Beautiful city. Not as beautiful as Atlantis of course. Though i fled it, Atlantis was and will always be close to my heart. Paragon city....the city of heroes. Here is where my old life ends and my new one begins. My name is Dariuse. I am nobody special. I'm a 7th Generation Atlantean. I am and will always be a Hero and a protector of the greater good. *Edit: I tried editing it to make it more ancient sounded, The science and DNA was a bit TOO advanced.** |
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| nialane | Jan 1 2010, 12:17 AM Post #2 |
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Please use spell check next time. Also capitalize correctly. Atlantis sunk between 400-500 BC so 13 does quite make sense for an age. |
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| Tritonius | Jan 1 2010, 12:46 PM Post #3 |
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Actually Atlantis is quite accurately theorized to have "sank" between 11000 and 10000 BC, Called the Final Destruction. I am actually reading the book with all the reference material at the moment. In any event, this character doesnt follow "our" canon at all... please take some time to read through some of it (the Bestiary, the Great Library are great places to see a lot of it... also members applications) |
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| Dariuse | Jan 1 2010, 07:36 PM Post #4 |
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Thanks for the advice. Trit. I tried playing around with the words to make it a bit more ancient sounding. Being i probably wont make it into the SG this go around do you have any more advice? |
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