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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 21 2009, 08:28 PM (196 Views) | |
| Ismene | Dec 21 2009, 08:28 PM Post #1 |
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GLOBAL NAME: [@Golden Streake] CHARACTER NAME: [Ismene Nell'xea] POWERSET/ARCHETYPE: [Katana, Regeneration-Scrapper] It occurs to me that a more plauasible story would be that she was born here, and following her parents death she returned to Atlantis. Having grown up in Paragon, she might'ntve found Atlantis to her liking and stole off to return heer CHARACTER INFORMATION: [Although I was born and raised on the surface, i'm a full blooded Atlantean. My mother and father (both warriors in the army) left Atlantis to see the surface world, never staying in one place for long. After i was born my parents kept us moving so no one would notice my slow ageing. Eventually we heard of a place called Paragon City where no one would notice us among the many superheroes and mutants that called it home. They always told me to fight for justice and honor no matter the cost, they trained me in combat and battle tactics of both Atlantean and human warriors. My childhood was filled with training and sword play instead of fun and horseplay. My parents served as heroes of paragon untill my father was captured and killed by Council soldiers. With nothing left tieing us to the surface my mother and I returned to Atlantis. After arriving in the city of Atlantis mother quickly re-atained her position in the army and I enrolled in the Academy. Mother was happy to be home but I had been raised on the surface, and although Atlantis would always have a strong place in my heart, I yearned to return to the sun and the land. So one night when my mother had retired to bed, I took a suit of her old armour, my fathers sword and and some food and left Atlantis for good. Now I live in Paragon city defending my father's memory and his honor. SCREENSHOT of character: [] |
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| swiftwinds | Dec 22 2009, 11:11 AM Post #2 |
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A good start the the character but I worry about the being raised on the surface. Atlantians age 1 year to 10 vs humans so you would have had to been on the surface for decades and this is not somthing that would be hidden easily. I think parts of the concept are good just a reworking is needed. Check over the Lore again or ask questions here and in game if you want some help. Nikias |
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| Nereidia | Dec 22 2009, 05:02 PM Post #3 |
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((Have met & spoken with in game -- made some sugestions after concerns were raised about the length of time the character would have been on the surface by herself with no contact with Atlantis. I like the look, the name -- the rp needs a wee work, but after some prodding from the rest of us she'll be fine. Player is on a trial acct and should be joining us after the holidays with a new bio.)) |
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