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| Application - Yildis | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 16 2009, 07:28 PM (327 Views) | |
| Yildis | Oct 16 2009, 07:28 PM Post #1 |
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Global: @Silver Sanguis Character name: Yildis Powerset/Archetype: Elec/Elec Scrapper Character information: Yildis has been a wild child all her life. As she was born on the surface she had an almost immediate exposure to the world above, and her life has been influenced greatly by it. She's always been fascinated by the rushed lives of the surface dwellers, and cannot help but put it into contrast with the patient and steady pace of her parents and people. As such, she has chosen to pursue a lifestyle in between, never having known either world on it's own. She may seem rushed to her people, and almost normal to the surface dwellers because of this. The combat style she picked up reflects this - Literally being lightning fast. While she still feels at home with her people, she grows increasingly detached from them as she almost forces herself to find her own way in life, giving her trouble relating to anyone due to her unique perspective, but paradoxically gives her an outsider's one at the same time, learing about both civilizations without prejudice. (( I hope i understood the background story correctly, my apoligies if i take a few too many liberties. For the rest, i'm in Europe, so i'm usually online a lot earlier than most other people, though i'm usually on quite late. ))
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| Persephia | Oct 17 2009, 07:12 AM Post #2 |
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No need to apologize for any liberty's taken, personally I would have liked to have seen you take more liberty's. You provide good information on who your character is, the sort of person they are without long winded ramblings and vagaries, but your character does not seem to have a touchstone with the SG's lore. Then again, not everyone is the 3rd cousin to the 5th Aunt of the Grand Snheztek Priest of the Flagamire. Some people, are simply people. I would much rather see a detailed personality that will evolve and grow as they become more immersed in the Role-Play, than see a 50,000 word back story that lists a characters history back for ten generations yet the character has all the personality of a soggy piece of card board who is completely unable to interact with anyone in live play. I like it, detailed where it counts, vague where it really doesn't matter. But it would be nice to see some form of a story in the back story. |
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| Yildis | Oct 18 2009, 03:49 PM Post #3 |
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I'll be retracting my application (for now at least). I have joined an SG on another character, and i don't think i can reasonably divide my time for now between more than one SG. I'll probably be coming back to this at some point though - It's a very cool SG concept
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| Naireus | Oct 18 2009, 06:38 PM Post #4 |
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(Too bad.) |
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