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Wake up call feedback
Topic Started: May 19 2018, 04:39 PM (31 Views)
Pandora's Box
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Always love good feedback/constructive criticism so if you have anything to say about my RP please do
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TheLostBoys

Big props mate for clearly paying attention to what happened in the match, taking it, rolling with it and incorporating it into your character/rp. And I'll gladly take that rematch :P

The value of this character is how it's grounded in realism, so most things you write are believable and I can tell Xander (Xander btw is one of my favourite names) reflects a large part of you, which will usually help you as a writer.

One thing all writers should try to think of and include is some sort of personal over-arching story (outside of any angles you may have going on) for their characters to help with character development within their rps, though not strictly necessary it helps flesh out the character/s and provides some contextual strength to rps. My biggest suggestion is just trying to find ways to flesh out the rps, add some depth and weight to your match-talk. Aside from some spelling and grammar I like what you do and think you've got a great foundation to build on.

Also I may have an idea for you with my other character Impakt...
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