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| Revenant Feedback | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 12 2018, 09:48 AM (76 Views) | |
| Revenant | May 12 2018, 09:48 AM Post #1 |
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Any sort of feedback will be appreciated. |
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| userpoets | May 12 2018, 10:49 AM Post #2 |
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It's not a bad intro RP, but it's not a good PPV RP. To elaborate... you're giving us the "origin story" of Revenant while barely mentioning your match or opponents at Paradise. It reads as if the PPV is an afterthought, which is not a good first impression. I feel like this would've been better served as a character development RP to tell us where Revenant comes from and what his and his handlers goals are in the CWF, then give us a more in depth look into Revenant for the match itself. Also, welcome to the CWF. As a general rule, people are more outgoing in giving RP feedback to people who also provide it, so keep that in mind. |
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| Revenant | May 12 2018, 11:15 PM Post #3 |
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In other words my match talking aspect needs more work. Thanks for the input. I'll put more effort into it in my next RP. |
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| The Weaver of Dreams | May 13 2018, 07:36 AM Post #4 |
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Correct. Mentioning the opponents names once does not constitute match talk at all. I know that being new to a fed makes it difficult, because you don't know the characters and dynamics, but reading up on your opponents through their biographies and previous roleplays is pretty much a must. |
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| Mia Rayne | May 15 2018, 06:32 PM Post #5 |
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Match talk has been a big factor in any fed I've ever been a part of and in all honesty I'm either good at it, or I'm not. Then again, how can I expect to get better if I don't try to get better? If that makes sense. I agree with the voices above in all honesty, not a bad intro but not a strong rp for a PPV. I Do get that it sucks being the new person when it comes to match talk, so if you need help feel free to ask 😊 Welcome to CWF though!! |
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