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Topic Started: Apr 28 2018, 03:00 PM (35 Views)
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The John Dulong Show: Every Monday on Apple Podcasts and Google Play
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And this, Ladies and Gentlemen, is how it's done.

You want more of a review with words and stuff? Aaaalrighty then. First things first, I love it. Even regardless of the content, it has this marvelous flow that makes it very easy to read and follow and that is a remarkable feat to begin with.

On to the content. I liked the little opening that has you outside and the little banter with Tyrone, morphing into Ian's office, it takes away the clinical sterility of some roleplays and makes it feel real.

The Kingcast, you can really picture it as a show, with the graphics and whatnot (and I had to chuckle about The Shadow being part of it, this is the third roleplay this week I am mentioned, must be doing something right, haha) and the match talk was some of the best I have read so far. Maybe because Paramount is your title, so to say, it feels extremely authentic and heartfelt, being able to draw from your own history, it gives it a lot more weight and you are able to build up your opponent just to run him into the wall of you always being one step ahead and/or above. And that together with the aforementioned flow makes this one hell of an rp!

Starr is going to really have to bring his AAA game to beat the King, it will be a truly royal affair!
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