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Feedback for Ataxia..; Might as well put my name on the chopping block to :P
Topic Started: Mar 23 2018, 12:37 PM (39 Views)
Ataxia

Since everyone else is asking and I've always felt that if you ask then I should ask to in these cases so I get everyone's point of view.

What do you guys think of the work so far?

What questions do you have for Ataxia?

What do you think is an improvement that needs to be made? Also I know the storyline stuff is somewhat of my main weakness with all of my characters so if you say I need to do that please be a bit specific cause I know it's a large problem lol.
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The Weaver of Dreams
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I LOVED your last rp for the battle royale. There was no dedicated character development, but just addressing all of your opponents is enough of a job, haha.

What I really like was that you had set up different locations and gimmicks for all the different characters, huge creativity here and you really managed to tear into (almost) everyone, making it both informative and creative. You've managed to keep enough of that off-the-wall zaniness, but at the same time bring in a far more focused approach that shows that while you are still nucking futs, there is this keen observer that is far more calculating and cunning than the strange antics would make you believe. Things seem random, but it's all just smoke and mirrors. And that is what makes Ataxia such an intriguing character and one that differs so nicely from the usual everyday run-of-the-mill-psychopaths out there these days.
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Oh, I have a ton of questions, but most of them fall under the heading "What the hell is that?" and that would ruin my fun.

I don't know how well introducing major storyline type elements would work because the nature of the character seems to be that he's a loner, with the Forsaken connection with the Shadow being mainly a partnership of mutual convenience and not an actual friendship, an abstract, somewhat off-kilter masked wrestler doesn't have much in the way of option when it comes to storyline away from the ring. I don't think it's hurt you so far so I wouldn't worry too much about it.
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