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| Freddie Styles | Mar 10 2018, 03:52 PM Post #1 |
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| Elisha | Mar 16 2018, 04:00 AM Post #2 |
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Thoughts as I go... * Name redacted, intriguing. * All very down to earth and real, like the touch with the magazine. * Interactions between the two feel very real and loving. Loo Ike's the ransition from one character's monologue to the other. * I found the dark purple difficult on a dark background, maybe partly down to reading on phone. * Brawl between the brothers - very powerful, clear Jason StJohn is major - would like to know more. * Ending part builds on "Accepting Fate" from Evolution. Sign of a new turn for Freddie? Liked this a lot - as always, there's a genuine sense of realism, particularly in the relationships between the characters, the language used and so on. Wrestling and story were integrated in a way that seemed very natural. Interested to see where Freddie goes from here. |
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