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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 9 2018, 06:33 PM (41 Views) | |
| ChristianSTARR | Mar 9 2018, 06:33 PM Post #1 |
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Then leave some feedback on my latest RP Christian STARR Diaries: Chapter Four Thanks
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| TheLostBoys | Mar 9 2018, 07:57 PM Post #2 |
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It better be chicken!! (Shall read and feed a lil later) |
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| Freddie Styles | Mar 9 2018, 09:06 PM Post #3 |
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Loving the Chronicles man. Getting this backstory like this is holding my interest, and the balance of story to match work is very good. I hardly see filler or things said just to be said. You hit on your points and keep it flowing. Keep up the good work |
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| TheLostBoys | Mar 9 2018, 11:37 PM Post #4 |
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Match talk is just pure gold, ripping into your opponent with a combination of snark and brash arrogance. A real joy to read. I like the inclusion of how Payne is introduced into the fold even if the scenario seemed a little contrived to me. Just too convenient. There may be something I've missed, or something yet to come that helps expalins this better but as is it just felt like the plot demanded it. If that makes sense However the other bit of CD where Christian and Alli are reconnecting is brilliant in that it shows the other, more human side of Christian and what grounds him. The juxtaposition between the two Christians is great to help us understand and engage with the character. Am enjoying seeing the character grow and develop and how he interacts with the CWF. |
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| The Weaver of Dreams | Mar 10 2018, 11:10 AM Post #5 |
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I really enjoy your rps, similar to the Lost Boys you manage to weave past and present together into a great whole that gives the reader both insight into how things came to be as well as what is happening and with great continuity. I loved to see how Payne came into the fold - and where the Batman glass came from, the humour that goes with it really makes a big difference. I just feel that it went from Eli dragging him in from the street to being the guy to help Starr with the rehab a little too fast, a minor blemish on the first part. The bit in the restaurant also was nice as continuation of your brief TMZ news blitz and the interaction between Christian and Allison feels natural and lighthearted until the end, where doom seems to be imminent, but then thre is the final spark of hope, I hope that you will continue to give us insight into this particular thread. The match talk is hitting hard, given that Metro has not been giving us much to work with so far, I like the little French inclusions. It is very well integrated into party mode and again you have that nice little detail at the end with Silver leaving, it's things like this that give an rp that little extra and make them even more memorable. Also liked the little DC cameo, which hints at maybe some good interaction in the future. Did not like the "no selling" phrase, though, since that reads too OOC to me, but that's a minor gripe. |
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