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| Freddie Styles | Mar 4 2018, 09:23 PM Post #1 |
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| The Weaver of Dreams | Mar 5 2018, 01:52 AM Post #2 |
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It was a very deep rp. The introspective beginning showed the doubt, the anger, the determination, very nicely done! The next part is a little confusing at times until you realize that you do completely switch persons, including their POV and thoughts and all. It nicely highlights the change in Freddie thanks to Aurora. Also shows that blood is thicker and water and that despite whatever problems Deshaun could get Freddie into, he still values family ties and a man in need. The match talk was spot on, maybe a little short on some of the opponents, especially given how long the rp overall was, so that would be the only real criticism I could really think of.
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